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purpletree
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   Topic: turtle, , etc...Posted: 23 February 2008 at 2:43pm |
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heres some wips of mine
yo've probably seen some of these before.... c&C welcome |
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BlackDragon
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Posted: 23 February 2008 at 3:34pm |
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Which ones are you willing to work on? I mean, which one would you like to work on.
The tree avatar looks done to me.
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purpletree
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Posted: 23 February 2008 at 4:15pm |
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cool... i ;m thinking that i;ll work on all of theses. its just whihc one will be ready first
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Jimmy Bojangles
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Posted: 23 February 2008 at 4:29pm |
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I don't really have any complaints with the avatar, at all. It looks quite nice.
The turtle shouldn't be dithered, in my opinion. It's too small for that. The sword is pillow shaded, and noise-ish effects on the hand-guard doesn't look good, in my opinion. I do like the design, save for the fact that the connecting piece of metal between the handguard and the blade looks like it would snap the second it hit something. Also, it looks like the blade is really, really dull. Try to make the edges look bright, and sharp. Edited by Jimmy Bojangles - 23 February 2008 at 4:48pm |
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BlackDragon
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Posted: 23 February 2008 at 4:43pm |
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Work on one. The reason for this is so you can focus and more imporantly learn.
I would say work on that turtle. It has the most oportunities to learn from.
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purpletree
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Posted: 26 February 2008 at 12:47am |
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so which ne should i work on.. if i did work on the turtle i don't know where to start...
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Jimmy Bojangles
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Posted: 27 February 2008 at 6:19pm |
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With the turtle, try removing the dithering, and add more contrast to the shading. Oh, and also each section of the shell is slightly raised and should be shaded as such. Here's a quick edit, and remember that I'm not a great pixel artist myself, so this might not be that great.
Note, I only edited the turtle. 
In comparison to yours:
I'll be the first to admit that I have no freaking idea how to shade yellow. Edited by Jimmy Bojangles - 27 February 2008 at 6:19pm |
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purpletree
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Posted: 28 February 2008 at 10:17pm |
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ok thanks for the edit... but i feel the turtle is a too smaller piece to dither or shade it...:( but idk...
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BlackDragon
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Posted: 29 February 2008 at 5:45pm |
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You can shade at this size, just not dither!
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purpletree
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Posted: 29 February 2008 at 8:36pm |
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ok then i'll try to SHADE it.. :)
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Metaru
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Posted: 01 March 2008 at 6:53am |
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what would be great for the turtle is that you could use it to start practicing AntiAliasing. a cell shading is all it needs to keep its simple look, yet the AA will be a great boost to achieve.
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I ate leel's babies
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purpletree
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Posted: 01 March 2008 at 2:52pm |
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so shade and aa it..... ok!~
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BlackDragon
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Posted: 01 March 2008 at 3:00pm |
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Great now go pixel.
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purpletree
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Posted: 07 March 2008 at 9:48pm |
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i tried aa ing it but it seriould didn't look good... any other ideas +
will my avatar be ok to submit? |
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Elwin
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Posted: 07 March 2008 at 11:16pm |
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The rainbow? You already submitted that one once, and it was rejected.
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purpletree
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Posted: 08 March 2008 at 1:47am |
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no the purpletree av
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Elwin
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Posted: 08 March 2008 at 5:31am |
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Oh, that one. I guess that would be good enough to submit.
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Terley
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Posted: 08 March 2008 at 1:58pm |
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aw dude, you totally just used my edit (with some minor changes), it was supposed to help you, not 'here just use this instead' .
 In your progress thread for your broccoli tree avatar you totally steered away from all my advise, now you've just used my edit, its pixel perfect in comparisant except for the AAed outline..
 my edit - your newest version
erm..
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pixelblink
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Posted: 08 March 2008 at 2:47pm |
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purpletree, you've got some 'splainin to do.
 I really find it hard to believe that someone who's been 'working' on the same pieces as long as you have can still not find the effort to improve but instead use other members to your own personal gain. It's a shame. Please put forth the effort and fix your mistakes |
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purpletree
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Posted: 11 March 2008 at 1:29am |
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ohhh so thats how i had two avatars....
ok what happened was i think, i saved terley's av on my usb called avatar보기 and my one avatar just to look at when i'm not on the internet.... and i posted the wrong won... so thats why it looked so good..... anyhows thats wat i thnk happend.... i;m sorry if it did any harm or offend or etc... so sorry won't do that again... :):):):):):P |
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BlackDragon
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Posted: 11 March 2008 at 2:20pm |
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Good to hear.
Now pixel.
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l3m0n5
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Posted: 11 March 2008 at 9:04pm |
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i acutally saw that like the first time it was slapped on his post in his earlier threads but i was wondering why no one aint never did said nothin. But anywho on a lighter note, nice to see u take responsibility and start pixelatin'. On the sword pic, where do u want your light source to be cuz it seems to be hovering directly between the viewer and the sword; sort of like the view of the sword is GTA2 style (bird's eye view) and the light source is hovering between you (the viewer) and the sword. Might wanna make it more defined like maybe more predominantly to one side. BLAO
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"Hate is my enemy, Life is short and Life is plenty, keep my eyes on my path cuz i know who sent me"
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purpletree
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Posted: 12 March 2008 at 1:54am |
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sort started oon the sword
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purpletree
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Posted: 14 March 2008 at 3:01pm |
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ok i found my old purpletree avatar and fixed up a few things...
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Acherhar
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Posted: 14 March 2008 at 4:04pm |
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I can still tell that is an edit of Terley's. I looked at it in detail, and some parts still match perfectly... come on, why not do your own version from beginning to end? Start from scratch and use Terley's as a guide.
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purpletree
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Posted: 15 March 2008 at 12:39am |
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no i;m serious this is from my latest edit... i swar on my life...
ok if you don't believe me go to the purpletree avatar wip thing that i made ages ago and see for yourself, the edit i revised is the one before i went and changed the whole style... i;m not a liar i swear to god.. |
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purpletree
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Posted: 16 March 2008 at 1:42pm |
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sorry for double post but does any one beleive me???
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Talos
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Posted: 16 March 2008 at 2:38pm |
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There is the simple fact that Terley's was an edit of yours. so yah, I see why some parts are still the same.
EDIT: I have decided to edit your flying yellow turtle, but only the turtle not the sky. 
I have also decided I like cell shading. Edited by Talos - 16 March 2008 at 3:06pm |
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Aleiav
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Posted: 17 March 2008 at 1:41pm |
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The yellow on the edit is a bit too saturated IMO.
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Talos
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Posted: 17 March 2008 at 1:57pm |
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most of those colors are originaly his.
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Aleiav
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Posted: 17 March 2008 at 5:33pm |
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Ah well then they are bad. :P
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purpletree
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Posted: 20 March 2008 at 3:12pm |
 -turtle
plus i had some old wips of mine 
they all need shading, i did mention these were from a while back.. |
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Piper802
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Posted: 22 March 2008 at 9:49pm |
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o_o The sword is pillow shaded and stuff, on the blade add some triangular shading to give it more ... detail in my opinion.
Edit:
And I guess since everyone else is doing turtle edits, here's what I'd personally do. D:\
 (I just edited your image)
Edit again..: (Olol now that I realise I screwed it up because the sun is coming from the top right hand corner, and I shaded from the left)
 (Your original version) Edited by Piper802 - 22 March 2008 at 10:32pm |
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purpletree
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Posted: 23 March 2008 at 1:08pm |
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yea i noticed that, but on my latest edit i removed the sun.... C&C are really welcome
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amerup
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Posted: 24 March 2008 at 6:02pm |
 What I did: anti-aliased, cleaned lines a bit, outlined and changed colors. (12 colors total.) This one might be fine without shading. =) |
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Aleiav
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Posted: 24 March 2008 at 6:04pm |
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How does that have 12 colors? Jeebus some of those must be nearly identical.
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purpletree
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Posted: 24 March 2008 at 10:25pm |
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amerup's edit acrually has 20 colours (irfran view).... i;ve got to say that is a lot of colours....
personally i dislike the colours.... no offense |
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amerup
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Posted: 25 March 2008 at 6:33am |
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Gah, barely any contrast. It was zoomed in 8x, that's why.
Yeah, maybe I miscounted. If you remove the AA, that will take away lots of colors, I bet. I thought the purple would fit your name. Since yellow is difficult to shade, I changed it to a darker green, which turtles really are.. I also figured this had a lack of saturation, so I made the colors more vibrant and saturated. Your choice. =) |
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Aleiav
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Posted: 25 March 2008 at 11:42am |
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I'd suggest redoing the turtle all over again so you can start with less colours instead of trying to keep track of how many you have now.
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purpletree
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Posted: 25 March 2008 at 1:14pm |
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ok so its really a good idea for the purple thing. and i actually liked the yellow...this one just seems... welll... i dunno any hows i will restart it ...
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amerup
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Posted: 25 March 2008 at 1:19pm |
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Yay. =)
Good luck, and keep the lines clean. :D PS: DO NOT go over 16 colors. =P |
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purpletree
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Posted: 27 March 2008 at 1:35pm |
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ok so i;ve done the lineart but any suggestions on a colour palette....?
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Talos
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Posted: 27 March 2008 at 2:40pm |
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I suggest posting the lineart so we can suggest.
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purpletree
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Posted: 28 March 2008 at 3:40pm |
 here you go i decided to make the canvas 64x63 and i added a cloud little buidlings on the bottom.. i think i should remove the builindgs but just wanting more c&c.... thanks
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