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Blueberry_pie
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Posted: 15 August 2008 at 2:29am

That looks awesome. I think the trees could use some more contrast.

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jalonso
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Posted: 15 August 2008 at 7:44pm

Stunning!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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cure
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Posted: 15 August 2008 at 8:54pm

The use of that brown as AA on the awning above the door doesn't really work. Everything else looks great.

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zi-double
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Posted: 20 August 2008 at 11:09am

Yep Blueberry - thanks. I plan when all spaces filled to make shadows as dark places over the trees because now change their position and I'm not shure what will happen :(

Thanks Jal - this keep my interest to finish piece :)

ThereIsNoCure - right repair that problem - now is better ;)

... and more progress - haven't so funny scenes, but think for more :P

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jalonso
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Posted: 20 August 2008 at 12:23pm

hmmm.... I would consider making the palm trunks in the grey colors instead of the brown so that it reads better. Maybe even mixing some greys with the lightest green colors.

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zi-double
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Posted: 20 August 2008 at 12:42pm

yep Jal trunks in new area or if I put more trees or wooden elements near to wooden building will going very unreadable ... also I think what will happen if I add new 2 colours for green shadows /shadows are only with 2 colours/, because shadows will fill half area :( and instead sand and dried land the area going to green place :) Also can use these new colours to make some palm leafs in more yellow/brown like dried.

must test :)

Edited by zi-double - 20 August 2008 at 12:43pm

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zi-double
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Posted: 21 August 2008 at 2:05pm

Add brown. now repair contrast of the trunks, but must try with diferent colours. Make repairs of the left parts of the columns from the shelter, over the roof and inside walls.

Also line between shadows and dried land with yellow now is better ? Think that problem is solved :)

With elephant have problems! Make him 3 times /first time turn like rhino pff/ and again isn't good :(

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zi-double
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Posted: 01 September 2008 at 1:13am

Until think what to do with previous in blank spaces, make this WIP building ...

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FrostPumpkin
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Posted: 01 September 2008 at 1:57am

Woa ! That leather/skin texture on the roof is really, really awesome !
The rocks bothers me, il could be waaay better IMO.

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Paulo Peres
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Posted: 23 September 2008 at 5:13am

A question, zi-double:

Before you begin the work, you make a sketch of all composition or you make the art direct in the pixel art? Depends the complexity of the work?

Wonderful images, congratulations!

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Fuzzyleaves
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Posted: 23 September 2008 at 8:58am

for your 3rd project, why is some of the shadows on the sand green , some are brown? Is there a reason, why is the shadow of the tree green and the building green and brown?

Also i think you might want to add foot prints, or slide marks where the people, animals have been walking and boy been sliding. The house looks nice, although it look hard to get in... is that step in the doorway?

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dragonrc
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Posted: 25 September 2008 at 7:30am

wow, great stuff. I love the roof on your newest building.
I have some spotted a problem with your previous piece though, I think it lacks unity. You can really see everything was placed separately on there, I believe adding a bit of extra shadows will fix this.
I did a quick edit on the house and the croc:

Here is a quick gif that might give a better example:

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Blueberry_pie Rear Admiral Joined: 24 July 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2176	Posted: 15 August 2008 at 2:29am
	That looks awesome. I think the trees could use some more contrast.
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 15 August 2008 at 7:44pm
	Stunning!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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cure Commander Joined: 23 March 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2859	Posted: 15 August 2008 at 8:54pm
	The use of that brown as AA on the awning above the door doesn't really work. Everything else looks great.
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zi-double Commander Joined: 05 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 277	Posted: 20 August 2008 at 11:09am
	Yep Blueberry - thanks. I plan when all spaces filled to make shadows as dark places over the trees because now change their position and I'm not shure what will happen :( Thanks Jal - this keep my interest to finish piece :) ThereIsNoCure - right repair that problem - now is better ;) ... and more progress - haven't so funny scenes, but think for more :P
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 20 August 2008 at 12:23pm
	hmmm.... I would consider making the palm trunks in the grey colors instead of the brown so that it reads better. Maybe even mixing some greys with the lightest green colors.
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zi-double Commander Joined: 05 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 277	Posted: 20 August 2008 at 12:42pm
	yep Jal trunks in new area or if I put more trees or wooden elements near to wooden building will going very unreadable ... also I think what will happen if I add new 2 colours for green shadows /shadows are only with 2 colours/, because shadows will fill half area :( and instead sand and dried land the area going to green place :) Also can use these new colours to make some palm leafs in more yellow/brown like dried. must test :) Edited by zi-double - 20 August 2008 at 12:43pm
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zi-double Commander Joined: 05 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 277	Posted: 21 August 2008 at 2:05pm
	Add brown. now repair contrast of the trunks, but must try with diferent colours. Make repairs of the left parts of the columns from the shelter, over the roof and inside walls. Also line between shadows and dried land with yellow now is better ? Think that problem is solved :) With elephant have problems! Make him 3 times /first time turn like rhino pff/ and again isn't good :(
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zi-double Commander Joined: 05 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 277	Posted: 01 September 2008 at 1:13am
	Until think what to do with previous in blank spaces, make this WIP building ...
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FrostPumpkin Commander Joined: 18 January 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 188	Posted: 01 September 2008 at 1:57am
	Woa ! That leather/skin texture on the roof is really, really awesome ! The rocks bothers me, il could be waaay better IMO.
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Paulo Peres Seaman Joined: 26 February 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 23	Posted: 23 September 2008 at 5:13am
	A question, zi-double: Before you begin the work, you make a sketch of all composition or you make the art direct in the pixel art? Depends the complexity of the work? Wonderful images, congratulations!
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Fuzzyleaves Commander Joined: 23 June 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 147	Posted: 23 September 2008 at 8:58am
	for your 3rd project, why is some of the shadows on the sand green , some are brown? Is there a reason, why is the shadow of the tree green and the building green and brown? Also i think you might want to add foot prints, or slide marks where the people, animals have been walking and boy been sliding. The house looks nice, although it look hard to get in... is that step in the doorway?
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dragonrc Commander Joined: 05 May 2006 Location: Netherlands Online Status: Offline Posts: 294	Posted: 25 September 2008 at 7:30am
	wow, great stuff. I love the roof on your newest building. I have some spotted a problem with your previous piece though, I think it lacks unity. You can really see everything was placed separately on there, I believe adding a bit of extra shadows will fix this. I did a quick edit on the house and the croc: Here is a quick gif that might give a better example:
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