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Quote dro man jerr Replybullet Topic: here fishy fishy
    Posted: 23 August 2008 at 11:55am
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heres the linework i just made
how can i make is scarier?

edit: tried hue shifting





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Quote DrunkBurger Replybullet Posted: 23 August 2008 at 11:58am
i dont see it
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Quote dro man jerr Replybullet Posted: 23 August 2008 at 12:08pm
sorry forgot imagee
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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 23 August 2008 at 1:30pm
It seems like it's crammed into the canvas.  Spines and stuff would be scary, but I'd get his pose down first, he looks awkward.
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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 23 August 2008 at 2:03pm
first i'd define what it is. a demon? a monster? a menace? explain yourself.
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Quote dro man jerr Replybullet Posted: 23 August 2008 at 3:28pm
ah well is is a demon fish
it just kind of happened
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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 23 August 2008 at 9:50pm
You didn't fix anything in the update.  The shading doesn't work, or whatever it is, there's nowhere near enough contrast between the colors.

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Quote dro man jerr Replybullet Posted: 24 August 2008 at 7:50am

 this should be better
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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 24 August 2008 at 11:15am
Center the fishthing.  It's pushed all the way to the left side of the canvas, and that's causing a lot of tension.
Your colors could use a little more contrast, a brighter highlight would be especially helpful.
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Quote dro man jerr Replybullet Posted: 24 August 2008 at 6:49pm
hmm thanks for cc ill try that
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