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    Posted: 05 December 2005 at 1:58am

I could do with some C&C on this line art...

 

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Quote inkspot Replybullet Posted: 05 December 2005 at 7:06am

Lose the sharp edges. I cannot say anything else for this simplesness, sorry.

 

Oh, one thing, the guns are oval? If you wanted the guns to be round symetrically, then the oval should be placed verticaly. I just haven't seen anyone making oval guns as this...



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Quote Fugitive Replybullet Posted: 05 December 2005 at 7:27am
I know it's not very good  But it's only my first attempt...
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Quote Lozzoling Replybullet Posted: 07 December 2005 at 7:41am

the guns look wrong, like oval on circle...is that deliberate?
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Quote Shark Replybullet Posted: 07 December 2005 at 8:54am
try not to make it so blocky also, use curves.
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Quote Fugitive Replybullet Posted: 07 December 2005 at 9:25am

I'll do that...

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Quote Pixel_Outlaw Replybullet Posted: 07 December 2005 at 10:16am
Yes, make some dynamic whing swoops , at the place where the wings attach to the body, there would be alot of turbulance. Also make a joint for the lego windshield. ( that's not a bad thing really)
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Quote Shark Replybullet Posted: 07 December 2005 at 10:53am
yeah give it some scoops and indents and panels, try colouring it
aswell for outlaws spaceship collab :D
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Quote Fugitive Replybullet Posted: 12 December 2005 at 4:09pm

Originally posted by Shark

yeah give it some scoops and indents and panels, try colouring it
aswell for outlaws spaceship collab :D

I'm try.. but it never looks right to me

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