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cure
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So its currently in an early WIP stage, and lacking the zombies, but I'm starting to get that post-apocolyptic vibe down at the moment. Started out as a small sprite of me with a bat, then I finally decided to do something with it. So far I've only used the colors found in the character, not sure if I want to expand the palette or keep those extreme restrictions (12 colors). Comments/criticism? keep in mind this is far from complete. Finished? version: Edited by ThereIsNoCure |
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pixelblink
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biohazard
Seaman ![]() Joined: 01 June 2006 Location: Canada Online Status: Offline Posts: 2 |
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8. more blood i really like that car, nice work so far. Edited by biohazard |
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cure
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Do not worry, there SHALL be gratuitous violence. And I believe I agree with the colo(u)r thing, more will be added. |
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pixelblink
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Damn you... I'm Canadian and there's more colour in Canada hence the extra "u"
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Ensellitis
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Don't go around admitting that, Blink.
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There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross. |
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Skull
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Nice - I like it so far. Sort of reminds me of Shaun Of The Dead.. I await the next update.
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Aleiav
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Looks cool so far. I like the work on the car especially. Can't wait for the bloooooood. |
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cure
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 23 March 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2859 |
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Ah, yes, Canada. Where the brilliant white of the snow is occasionally broken by the brown fur of a moose or bold red of a mountie's jacket. Only kidding, of course. And on behalf of all Americans I would like to thank you for Pamela Anderson. Anyway, back to the matter at hand. Here's a small update, since I'll be out of town for a few days and I will probably be unable to work on it. The cop turned out good, in my opinion, but the dead guy still needs some work. I added (1) more kuller. I hope this satisfies the public's bloodlust for the time being. keep in mind the places and positions of existing persons and objects is not final. Edited by ThereIsNoCure |
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Ensellitis
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That is awsome!! Are you planning on making this a game?
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There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross. |
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cure
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Hell, I've barely got the skills for a mockup. My computer skills extend no further than Paint and Wordpad. How's a text based game sound?
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Ensellitis
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I'm sure that if you make enough sprites we could get someone to make it for ya.
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There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross. |
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Akira
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 03 March 2005 Location: New Zealand Online Status: Offline Posts: 220 |
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oh boy oh boy oh boy oh boy... continue.
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cure
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 23 March 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2859 |
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@Ensellitis: You and your insatiable lust for blood and gore. Originally I was thinking more "post-apocalypse" and less "mid-apocalypse". More "28 Days Later", less "Dawn of the Dead". But who knows, I may just go all out and make it a bloody massacre. @Akira: Continue I shall, this will not be abandoned. But expect a brief hiatus, as previously mentioned. |
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Skull
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Brilliant
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Aleiav
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Excellent so far. It would make a nice game, I think. :)
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Scruffs
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lookin nice, make chunks of the building completely impaled, like holes in the buildings |
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cure
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 23 March 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2859 |
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...and an undead fat guy, just for you, Skull. Not exactly sure the direction I'm taking the second building. Suggestions are welcome/needed. Edited by ThereIsNoCure |
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Shark
Commander ![]() ![]() a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136 |
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Fcucking awesome pallette. dont have any crits just dont unfinish it.
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Snark, we love yuu.
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Monkey 'o Doom
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 24 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2994 |
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Make it the "Desk Chair Warehouse Outlet"!
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iSTVAN
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Diggin it so far, ThereIsNoCure, but I can't help but feel the car doesn't match the people. The black outline of the characters makes me feel like the car should also be outlined- as it currently looks much less cartoony than the people. Lovin' the palette and the little detailed textures here and there aswell |
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Listen to what the flower people say...
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cure
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Updated. Joy! So, good changes or bad changes (mostly the car)? Suggestions remain extremely welcome. |
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iSTVAN
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Perhaps space 'Slick' and 'Ed's' further apart, or write slick in a different font. At first I read it as 'Slicked's Pawn and Jewelry.' The car always looked good, an outline just seems to match character sprites better in my head. Nice work. Edited by iSTVAN |
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Listen to what the flower people say...
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cure
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 23 March 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2859 |
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Thanks, didn't notice that. It has now been spaced. EDIT 6/6/06: Gooder? Badder? Some bright colors were dulled, the road is now a lighter color, etc. Edited by ThereIsNoCure |
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cure
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 23 March 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2859 |
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Lucky you, I've UPDATED: I've started work on the alleyway, just to let everyone know it hasn't been neglected, and busted up the windows on the left as well. The zombie officer's right leg has been moved up, and the hero has a slightly different stance. Please feel free to point out any negative changes I have made, and I'll be sure to fix them. |
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iSTVAN
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I like the new partial smash look to the glass directly right of Slick Ed's sign window. The alley rat was only noticable when I zoomed in.
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Listen to what the flower people say...
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cure
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Thanks, iSTVAN, wasn't sure how that smashed glass would work out. The rat seems to be a reoccuring character, I think this is his third scene I've pixeled. Maybe he should be my personal mascot. |
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Shark
Commander ![]() ![]() a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136 |
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There was an artist who incorporated a mouse into every picture of
his... cant remeber who... but you could do the same with a rat. |
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Snark, we love yuu.
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iSTVAN
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@Shark: Was he an illustrator? I think I recall something about an illustrator by the name of Graeme Base putting mice into his picture books. Or atleast one of them,'the 11th Hour' and lots of frogs in his dragon book. |
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Shark
Commander ![]() ![]() a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136 |
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He might have been.. i had some big fold out book when i was a kid
with mice in every picture.. I think thats where i remeber it from. |
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Snark, we love yuu.
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cure
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 23 March 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2859 |
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Enough mindless chit-chat! It's update time! (Please hold all aplause until the end of the post): Theres probably not too much more work to be done, its finally nearing completion. And so, it is now time to critique the hell out of it. |
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Ensellitis
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I wanna see a body or two hanging out of a window! Other then that, I think it's perfect
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There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross. |
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Monkey 'o Doom
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Maybe a few ratzombies crawling out of a sewer?
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cure
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 23 March 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2859 |
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I thought about that myself (the window thing). I think I'll work on that shadow in the alleyway and maybe the protagonist's bat, due to feedback over at Pixelopolis. @MoD: Not sure if this zombie world permits zombification-ness outside of people. A sewer though, theres an idea. Like a manhole in the road. Edited by ThereIsNoCure |
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Nitram
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The shadow that is casted over the looks to be wrong, I'm sure the that wall would cover if not all, most of the dumpster
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cure
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Jesus Christ, ANOTHER update? : Another bloody corpse for Ensellitis, though I'm not sure how well I pulled it off. I decided I'd cut all the building action anticipation bullsh*t and whack a zombie. The pose could probably use some tweaking, I'll work with it a little bit and maybe add some more detail before wrapping this piece up. Only downside (for me) is that since I had to move the main character, I had to get rid of that reflection/shadow deal he cast on the window, which I personally liked. |
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Shark
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Snark, we love yuu.
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Nitram
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I noticed that all the zombies, besides the whacked one and the one hanging out the window, feet are pretty much in the exact same postion :P I think you should add something up in the left corner of the piece, where the road goes up. Besides that stuff its such a wonderful piece |
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Pixel_Outlaw
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that sidewalk tile 2 in from the left could use a strom drain methinks. EXCELLENT WORK +5 FAV...oh wait wrong page.... |
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cure
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Updated: I'm getting a little tired of this project, as I'm sure the rest of you are. Fear not, it won't be much longer.
2.Sweet Zombie Jesus 3.Shock Shock Horror Horror ZOMBIE PIXEL ART UNITE! Edited by ThereIsNoCure |
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Artisan
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heh heh and together we make - the zombie pixel team.. w3 e4t J0uR
Br41nZ *cough* anyways * bottles = nice * i think you should just be able to see the girls arm reaching from off the screen to the bear maybe the back of her head too, but not actualy holdng it just reaching out. *w00t hot dogs *not tooo keen on the highlights on the points of the glass any ways to make them less bright but still highlighted? |
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Demon
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I really love the palette used in this project! As well as the art, the sprites are really detailed for their size, which can sometimes be a hard task. Ever thought of making this into a game?
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"At least we killed some boredom..." - Death Note.
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Larwick
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![]() But yeah, sorry if i havent posted before, although i have been following this quite closely. Looking great, quite alot of the crits i would have made have already been mentioned. Perhaps later i'll have more time to critisise. Keep it upp. |
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Demon
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Hey, hey I just see possibilities; everyone loves a good zombie game.
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"At least we killed some boredom..." - Death Note.
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halfDemon
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Every pixel counts, even the dead ones.
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cure
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Hopefully final/close to final/nearing final Update: Added the dead girl, added condiment bottles, adjusted the main character's pose, added skidmarks (not sure if I like them, opinions?), toned down the highlights on the edges of the jadded glass just a tad. So, maybe a last round of critiques/suggestions? |
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Setzer
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no dead hooker in the alleyway? :(.
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Ensellitis
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There was, but she is in my closet now.
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There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross. |
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jalonso
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Originally posted by ThereIsNoCure I'm getting a little tired of this project, as I'm sure the rest of you are. Fear not, it won't be much longer. I love this thread, don't end it ![]() ![]() |
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Aleiav
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I love the addition of the bloody ice cream pushy cart. It's amusing. How about zombie children!? :P I think it would be cool to continue the image horizontally more. You could make it like a never ending zombie story board. That would be cool. :P A lot of work but... cool. |
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