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Filax_666
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Joined: 10 August 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 108 |
![]() Topic: Maybe the beginning of something bigger...Posted: 18 September 2006 at 12:06pm |
Souly inspired me and, as soon as got my (beloved) computer back, I did this. I like it, but there are always details that can be improved - that's where you guys can be helpful
At this moment only a few things bother me: * I feel the place where the hair thouches the face is not very good...what's the real problem? Solutions? * I highlighted the hair whith the skintone but I'm not sure if it looks good...Opinions? I'll be waiting for you C&C. Love, "Your Sweet Six-Six-Six" |
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Opacus
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Joined: 19 July 2025 Online Status: Offline Posts: 328 |
![]() Posted: 18 September 2006 at 1:12pm |
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I think the outline of the hair doesn't need any AAing, only makes it look fat and bluured. I like this clean style, though : ).
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Souly
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Joined: 13 December 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2451 |
![]() Posted: 18 September 2006 at 2:40pm |
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I keep inspiring people.
You're all crazy my art isn't that good. :$ Anyways, I think the arms are much too short. |
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Brian the Great
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RED! Joined: 03 March 2005 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 2221 |
![]() Posted: 18 September 2006 at 3:22pm |
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Originally posted by Souly But it got style, mang.You're all crazy my art isn't that good. :$ |
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Microradiation
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Joined: 16 September 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 18 |
![]() Posted: 18 September 2006 at 6:00pm |
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The contrast in the hair needs to increase to make the highlights more visible.
Souly, your art is cave-story-tastic
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Formerly CrazyAznGamer.
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Stitchy
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PJ Pioneer Joined: 09 June 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 405 |
![]() Posted: 18 September 2006 at 7:22pm |
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I think the skin tone could be more saturated, but that's just my personal preference, and probably would go against what you're going for (or your real complexion.) Perhaps the hair - skin transition is kinda weird because the dark shades of the hair and the skin are too close in color and shade. There just needs to be a little more definition between them, perhaps with some slight/broken outlining of the hair. It looks awesome already, though. :'D It's just not quite where you want it yet.
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jalonso
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Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |
![]() Posted: 19 September 2006 at 10:33am |
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I fully agree with Stichy. The character itself is really cute. It may be your intention, the feet as shown makes the sprite appear to jumping?
@souly, the style is awesome and very original, in fact its very, very good. |
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Filax_666
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Joined: 10 August 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 108 |
![]() Posted: 19 September 2006 at 1:35pm |
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Many thanks for the feedback, it was very helpful!
Tried to have in account all of what been said while reworking the image, but I probably missed something...here goes: old-------new ![]() (now that I see both side by side, I think the new one has lost most of it's cuteness )I didn't make the arms longer, but tried to incorporate those pseudo-hands...the legs remain the same as the ones on the first sketch, I haven't had better ideas for the yet (suggestions are welcome though). I also darkened the skintone a bit, so it suited better for the hair's highlight. I darkened the whole because it's now closer to my hair's real colour and to (try to) fix the hair/skin problem. I also reduced the colour count by one! *maniac grin* And I think that's it... I still feel it needs improvement, but I'll be waiting for more feedback from you! |
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Larwick
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Joined: 18 July 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4015 |
![]() Posted: 19 September 2006 at 3:37pm |
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Love it filax.
I realise i may have ruined the cute small feel to it with the length of the limbs, but i just thought it was a cool pose. Take from it what you will, it was fun to edit. Added white #FFFFFF. =O
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Filax_666
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Joined: 10 August 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 108 |
![]() Posted: 20 September 2006 at 3:54am |
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older----old----new----new(optional)
![]() Ten-minute edit, just brightened the hair a bit. Tell me which one you like the most...
@larwick: rofl thanks for showing me what I SHOULDN´T do with the arms and legs xD it was helpful anyway, since it showed me new possibillities on the shirt! Thanks a bunch!
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jalonso
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Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |
![]() Posted: 20 September 2006 at 11:55am |
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#3
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Larwick
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![]() Posted: 20 September 2006 at 3:06pm |
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Ya 3!
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