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kostik92
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Joined: 15 January 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 61 |
   Topic: wormss(wip)Posted: 18 February 2007 at 5:08am |
  
  edits and comments are welcome!
i dont know how to make eyes more realistic and body too!
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ceddo
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Posted: 18 February 2007 at 5:18am |
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They look very nice! At the beginning though, I thought it was a rip of a previous WIP thread... found it.
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jalonso
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Posted: 18 February 2007 at 7:05am |
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Why do you want realism? I like your 'slime'. The orange shade is maybe not the right shade of orange but that's it. OK that light grey highlight shade is odd. All else including the pixelling is pretty good.
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kostik92
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Posted: 18 February 2007 at 7:07am |
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but i need revision (what is the problem?)
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jalonso
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Posted: 18 February 2007 at 7:12am |
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oh!, I don't know what to say then. I would have allowed these. Especially all 3 together as one piece like you see here. Still, Try changing the shades of orange slightly, maybe add one more darker orange shade to delineate the mouth some. Fix that highlight color and just to appease the pixel gods throw in some AA.
ps: maybe the mod that sent it back will post his/her opinion for you. |
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leel
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Posted: 18 February 2007 at 7:14am |
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the problem may be tha it's just a basic little worm, Why don't you try adding some interest to it.
Heres some ideas:
- trail of slime
- background
- another worm + some interaction
- better colors - Like jalonso said, the saturated orange isn't doing too much for you. Try more towards the greenish-gray with much less saturation
- I like the original squiggly eyes the best, to be honest, though that last one with the brow, with some work, could be just as cute
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kostik92
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Posted: 18 February 2007 at 7:35am |
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thanks ill try(but i can only submit 100x100 pictures why? )
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leel
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Posted: 18 February 2007 at 7:38am |
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the 100x100 is only the preview. if you have bigger pixels than that you need to submit two images - the piece itself and a 100x100 preview for it.
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AdrianJensen
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Posted: 18 February 2007 at 7:52am |
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lol, that's awesome.
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My gallery lives here:
http://www.pixeljoint.com/p/8355.htm?pg=1&sec=icons |
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kostik92
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Posted: 18 February 2007 at 8:32am |
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something like this?
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jalonso
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Posted: 18 February 2007 at 8:33am |
 
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AdrianJensen
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Posted: 18 February 2007 at 8:33am |
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gross dude, i love it.
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Ensellitis
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Posted: 18 February 2007 at 9:04am |
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i was the one that sent them back. he knows why they were sent back, because he got the message... public queue scoring was really low, i automatically send back if the score reaches a certain amount.
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There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross. |
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BlackDragon
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Posted: 18 February 2007 at 9:44am |
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Leel's idea
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"A little pain never hurt anyone." - Blueberry_Pie
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kostik92
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Posted: 18 February 2007 at 10:15am |
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kostik92
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Posted: 20 February 2007 at 7:47am |
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i wanted to do something big
and so here it is
it is only a (wip)
like these(gif)
 edits and commetns are welcome! Edited by kostik92 - 20 February 2007 at 8:54am |
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leel
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Posted: 20 February 2007 at 8:32am |
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oh no! don't save as jpg, the colors are all ruined now
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kostik92
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Posted: 20 February 2007 at 10:17am |
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i have a problem with the clouds
could you suggest something?
heres my edit:
 Edited by kostik92 - 20 February 2007 at 12:32pm |
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