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The palette basicly sucks, i've always been bad at that.
Just anything to change is helpful, it has a ways to go till its done.

EDIT- Just wanted to see how it lookw ith outline, so.

Final?

Edited by Christopher - 19 March 2007 at 12:38pm

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Christopher Commander Joined: 09 February 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 110	Topic: Fighter Character Posted: 17 March 2007 at 8:02pm
	The palette basicly sucks, i've always been bad at that. Just anything to change is helpful, it has a ways to go till its done. EDIT- Just wanted to see how it lookw ith outline, so. Final? Edited by Christopher - 19 March 2007 at 12:38pm
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 18 March 2007 at 6:17am
	Great pose. I say shade using dramatic lighting and keep strong outlines to define the areas, maybe some simplified selout. Colors are workable.
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Serendor Midshipman Joined: 27 February 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 79	Posted: 18 March 2007 at 3:50pm
	Yes, some shadows on and it would be great the foot in the back seems to be a little tiny compared to the rest of the guy....
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leel Commander Joined: 29 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3001	Posted: 18 March 2007 at 6:05pm
	just up the contrast, the colors are fine for the most part. The problem is that they all look the same.
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Christopher Commander Joined: 09 February 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 110	Posted: 18 March 2007 at 7:37pm
	Finished version, unless anyone says different.
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Aleiav Commander Joined: 08 April 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2380	Posted: 18 March 2007 at 11:47pm
	Try upping the contrast a bit. The colors don't seem to different from eachother.
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Christopher Commander Joined: 09 February 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 110	Posted: 19 March 2007 at 12:41pm
	"Didnt gain the score needed to get into the gallery" So...About that......... I tried to up the contrast a little bit from the beginning one. So whats the major thing its not getting approved for?
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Forge Seaman Joined: 01 March 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 16	Posted: 19 March 2007 at 1:06pm
	For me, I think the weakest part of this piece is the head and face. First, I think the head could be larger and wider. It looks as though his and neck are 1 cylinder. Making the head and face wider will give you more room to detail it. Otherwise, I think the pose is great and your proportions seem good. Maybe some more contrast and shading. Good job.
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Ensellitis Commander Joined: 19 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10099	Posted: 19 March 2007 at 3:00pm
	many things bother me about this. first the face... forge explains that... the next is the shading... you have highlights where you should have shadows, mainly on the arms at the sleeve
	ಠ_ಠ There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross.
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Christopher Commander Joined: 09 February 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 110	Posted: 19 March 2007 at 7:55pm
	Alright, thanks ens ill try to touch it up some tommorow.
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