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    Posted: 26 May 2007 at 5:15pm
just to clarify this isnt a render It was hand pixelled
 
 
 
this is going to be a sheet by the way an RPG sheet for my friends comic because he as a PS3 and marvel ultimate alliance and wanted to make a comic about it so he asked me if I would make the sprites for him!
 
any crits?
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 27 May 2007 at 1:28am
Crop the image, thats my suggestion... (oh and the shading on the face is pretty weird...)
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Quote theguy Replybullet Posted: 27 May 2007 at 5:57am
fixed it, plus I moved his shoe a bit two the right it looked like he was pretending to be a cowboy or something plus its going to be a sheet and I'm using GG so I can't crop it without having to constantly change the canvas size paste new images to crop
 
 
anywho any more crits?
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Quote leel Replybullet Posted: 27 May 2007 at 6:43am
his knees look bent in the wrong way
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Quote theguy Replybullet Posted: 27 May 2007 at 6:44am
good point I'll change that now
 
EDIT:
 
 
any better?


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Quote PixelSnader Replybullet Posted: 27 May 2007 at 10:31am
why the hugeass canvas?

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Quote theguy Replybullet Posted: 27 May 2007 at 10:35am

mostly because I'm using GG the other part is because I can't be bothered to copy and paste new image, lol



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Quote AdrianJensen Replybullet Posted: 27 May 2007 at 10:38am
With the unbending of his knees, the feet look a little off, maybe they should face forward.
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Quote theguy Replybullet Posted: 27 May 2007 at 11:01am
m'kay
 
EDIT:
 
done
 


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Quote leel Replybullet Posted: 27 May 2007 at 6:31pm
I dont see any difference in what you did, sorry.  What I meant was the shading.  If the knees are bent, they should get more light since they're coming towards you.  All you have is a giant shadow which shows that they're not coming towards but away from the viewer.   
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Quote AdrianJensen Replybullet Posted: 27 May 2007 at 9:00pm
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m'kay
 
EDIT:
 
done
 
Wow, my words are powerful. Now give him a tophat and a bowtie.
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Quote HiyuKantaro Replybullet Posted: 28 May 2007 at 6:55am
becuase the top of the face is light flesh coloured. it looks like he has a beard on the bottom of his face, and it looks like he has hair all over his body
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Quote theguy Replybullet Posted: 28 May 2007 at 6:58am
so darken the skin mid tone basically ok.
 
 
not much changed just the pallette and a tiny bit of how I shded the face
 
EDIT: CRAP! I just saw what leel said so here
 
 


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Quote PixelSnader Replybullet Posted: 28 May 2007 at 9:05am
get. rid. of. the. huge. ass. canvas.

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Quote leel Replybullet Posted: 28 May 2007 at 9:31am
mhm you're getting there, but you have way too many colors. Honestly jeans aren't that shiny and all the highlighting made his thighs look like a doughnut! XP

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Quote theguy Replybullet Posted: 28 May 2007 at 10:21am
Originally posted by Homer

Mmmmm thigh doughnut
anywho heres the latest update
 
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Quote leel Replybullet Posted: 28 May 2007 at 11:47am


bent legs?
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Quote theguy Replybullet Posted: 28 May 2007 at 12:00pm

ok I will redo the knees

 
I like this version better


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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 28 May 2007 at 12:23pm
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ok I will redo the knees

 
I like this version better

I do not.. Now he is standing like some very dump person.. Not like he is ever going to move and take action.. I like leel's edit.. That also removes something of the symetry...
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Quote theguy Replybullet Posted: 28 May 2007 at 12:34pm
have you played marvel ultimate alliance? if not then you don't know his stance
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 28 May 2007 at 12:47pm
Originally posted by theguy

have you played marvel ultimate alliance? if not then you don't know his stance

His stance in game doesnt matter!
Creating art is not about mimic others, creating art is about CREATING.. so you can CREATE your OWN better stance, or atleast let your artistic feelings go over, to choose for the best stance....!!
Like this one.. this one is pretty cool :)
http://images.buycostumes.com/mgen/merchandiser/21510.jpg

somee other nice poses:
http://www.marveldirectory.com/pictures/individuals/w_3d/wolverine.gif
http://www.silverbulletcomics.com/~jennyg/writers/fowler/wolverine14.JPG
http://www.marveldirectory.com/pictures/individuals/w_1d/wolverine5.gif
http://www.internationalhero.co.uk/w/wolverine3.jpg


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Quote Kfuchoin Replybullet Posted: 28 May 2007 at 1:08pm
try other stances. i don't liek that one =/
 
here you the most popular wolverine stance
 
this was not made by me!
 
full sprite sheet:


Edited by Kfuchoin - 28 May 2007 at 1:49pm
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Quote theguy Replybullet Posted: 28 May 2007 at 1:43pm

I shall use the top link in lolliges bpost

EDIT: but first I'm gonna finish off a peice of pixel art (I've only just finished about a quarter of it and it took 3 hours long so don't expect me too be done soon


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Quote NuffinInMyMuffin Replybullet Posted: 28 May 2007 at 3:00pm

On the shirt, it seems that he is really realyy buff and beefy. But unless the shirt is uber tight it wouldn't define his muscles like that.

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Quote theguy Replybullet Posted: 29 May 2007 at 12:40am
are talking about mine?
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Quote leel Replybullet Posted: 29 May 2007 at 3:25am
Originally posted by Lollige

I like leel's edit.. That also removes something of the symetry...
  I only edited one leg, to make a point without doing all his work.
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Quote Kfuchoin Replybullet Posted: 29 May 2007 at 6:16am

look at leels edit... because right now his legs are a mess... try to make what leel did,  =)

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Quote theguy Replybullet Posted: 29 May 2007 at 6:18am
the whole points of edits is too point you in the right direction not to make you copy what the edit was
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Quote Ensellitis Replybullet Posted: 29 May 2007 at 6:35am
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the whole points of edits is too point you in the right direction not to make you copy what the edit was


holy crap.  first new person in A LOOOOOOOONG time to finally get it!  good going!
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Quote Kfuchoin Replybullet Posted: 29 May 2007 at 6:42am
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the whole points of edits is too point you in the right direction not to make you copy what the edit was
 i know, but follow leel's edit, make soemthing like that.. bbecause right now the legs are a mess..
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Quote Feron Replybullet Posted: 29 May 2007 at 9:18am
Originally posted by Kfuchoin

because right now the legs are a mess..


not just the legs....
hmmmm.
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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 29 May 2007 at 9:54am
sorry, but this guy looks like a son goku with claws, not like wolverine.
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 29 May 2007 at 10:06am
Originally posted by Metaru

sorry, but this guy looks like a son goku with claws, not like wolverine.

Metaru is right.. I think you should take a look at other wolverine art, and take a look at the body.. he has a very wide chest, huge shoulders, normal hips etc... Take a look again at this picture...



Now put THAT body into those new clothes.. but those new clothes look stupid I think... But ok thats your choise.. you can change a some1's look, but you cant change his body...
In your version I dont see those large shoulders, and his hair is pretty weird too..
In this version he just has a mask, thats why its pointy etc.... but that doesnt mean the hair does the same...
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Quote theguy Replybullet Posted: 29 May 2007 at 10:32am
it's not my choice it's my freinds I don't like that costume either but your know, and actually his hair is like any way
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 29 May 2007 at 10:35am
Originally posted by theguy

it's not my choice it's my freinds I don't like that costume either but your know, and actually his hair is like any way


Its your art isnt it? WHy dont you make the choises than?And im shure his body is the same.. Cant you post some screenshots of that game with wolverine?
I can find alot of screenshots but not with wolverine.. THe only usefull thing I have found now is this:
http://membres.mezimages.com/image/manuneo/playstation%203/marvel-ultimate-alliance-1030.jpg
OLD OUTFIT!




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Quote theguy Replybullet Posted: 29 May 2007 at 12:06pm
http://wiimedia.ign.com/wii/image/article/748/748762/marvel-ultimate-alliance-20061201060449340.jpg new outfit that is wolverine in the first costume you get along with the things first costume and everyone elses aswell!
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 29 May 2007 at 12:12pm
Originally posted by theguy

http://wiimedia.ign.com/wii/image/article/748/748762/marvel-ultimate-alliance-20061201060449340.jpg new outfit that is wolverine in the first costume you get along with the things first costume and everyone elses aswell!

Ok nice screenshot.. Now look at him.. He has huge shoulders, his pose is like he is going to take action, and his clothes are pretty tight.. If he had tight pants your version the legs should be way thinner.. and your clothes look very loose...
And his belt is pretty low too..
Now do the same in your image than :)

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Quote theguy Replybullet Posted: 30 May 2007 at 2:19am
actually I'm gonna redo it that would take way too much editing to do and it would look like a different peice, but this time I'm using a simpler style.
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