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Quote [thUg] Replybullet Posted: 24 May 2010 at 8:29pm
Finaly but can't choose BG dithering or not.

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Quote skamocore Replybullet Posted: 24 May 2010 at 8:37pm
Without, but maybe AA the circular background.
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 24 May 2010 at 8:55pm
Those are so good and have to be seriously considered. My only crit is that weekly challenges are not trophy comps. They are ribbon comps. Seems like that's a major flaw.
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Quote Manjaman Replybullet Posted: 25 May 2010 at 6:00am
The hands could be refined a bit (fingers of the second icone and thumb of the third one), but this is pretty awesome ! Your should use less contrast in the bg also, maybe darken the lighter blues.
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 25 May 2010 at 7:42am
Lots of great sets by all but they all have things that can make them better.

We were down to 2 icon sets but we now have complete input and so this is the consensus. While one of these 4 sets will be used. If you have not yet made a set but want to be considered use these comments below as guidelines.

These icons will be used every week so please pixel cleanly

For the challenge icon we like Dawn's 'face to face' idea because it says challenge clearer than the other ideas. [tHug]s hands design can also work.

For the voting icon Manjaman and [tHug]s way of showing is best.

For the winner icon we like the podium idea as presented by Calv and Manja. The subtle animation on Calv's really makes it pop and we love that!

The typography used by [tHug] is the simplest but is the best option. Clean, sharp and legible.



A- Manjaman
The Main objection to your set is the BGs. They have too much contrast and are somewhat dark. Maybe making it very subtle and light. In your set we'd love to see a new #1 using faces, like Dawn's or hands like [tHug]s. Your type is a little hard to read (less colors on that?).

B- [tHug]
Our Main objection is the background making the icons hard to read. Maybe softening those up. Challenges are ribbon comps so a trophy should not be used in the winners icon.

C- Calv
We think your voting icon is not very positive cuz the X is kinda negative (nitpicking), Highlight the 'yes' checkmark. The challenge idea really is awesome and the best but its also a lot to process for an icon, which is why we like the simpler face to face design. The animation on winners is perfect. Your type is too hard to read.

D- DawnBringer
The faces just don't match the other 2 icons and the dithering style is kinda crazy for icons. Your type is nice.

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Quote KORCHA Replybullet Posted: 25 May 2010 at 7:43am
@jalonsoaw
the trophy could emphasize on winning right?
Well regardless of that minor flaw and for competitions sake, it's finished. Enjoy:
edit: uh we posted at the same time.

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Quote Calv Replybullet Posted: 25 May 2010 at 8:11am
Shall I redo the text and tweek the voting one.  I'll make a box instead of a cross.  I don't like the text on mine either :P
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 25 May 2010 at 8:15am
We'd much rather have the set made by just one person, so yes, if you could rework the challenge (faces) and voting (positive attitude) and type (cleaner and simpler) that would be awesome.

@KORCHA, hehe, your set is too soft and hard to read (nice pixelling job tho). No trophies :(


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Quote Manjaman Replybullet Posted: 25 May 2010 at 8:25am

Hope the text is more legible.
I'm quite disappointed you don't like the challenge icone, i find it punchy (haha). I'll try other solutions, but i feel uncomfortable using others'ideas =/
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 25 May 2010 at 8:31am
Oh I love the hand itself. I don't have a problem but its not just me choosing :p
I do like those big pixels removed even though to me it looked like the hand was breaking the top panel, anyhoo...

As for the using other's ideas. I don't see why this would or should be a problem. Its like an Art Director overseeing a project and the Creatives fitting the project specs. Your call, we are really thankful so many of you participated in this.
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Quote DawnBringer Replybullet Posted: 25 May 2010 at 10:03am
Alrighty-o. Made an update, changed the faces and hands into a more uniform style. Thinned out the lines a bit. Completed AA. Balanced the red bkg-colors. Added shadow to the vote-sheet. Not sure about the pencil (the big one is not centered). Also, smiles might be more positive?


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Quote Ninja Crow Replybullet Posted: 25 May 2010 at 10:51am
@ Manjaman: I love yours a lot, though they have the most difficult to read font I'm afraid.
  1. the hand looks like it is holding the swirl, and while it is beautifully pixelled, it is simple enough that it could represent anything - doesn't seem unique to the Joint challenge.
  2. the voting box looks like a Kleenex box, and even though the hand is, again, beautiful, I think elements should not be repeated from image to image. I feel that just a sheet with, say, boxes on them and one single bold green tick (check) would be the best.
  3. I love your coloured boxes, but the shadow or something on the yellow one prevents the blue box from seeming to sit securely on top (which is to say that all the lines make it look like the boxes are stacked properly, but the colouring makes the blue look like it is overlapping).

@ DawnBringer: I really feel like a different colour scheme should be a requirement for the challenge, and I'm glad yours does that so well.
  1. I like the smile for the faces, but I feel that it should look a bit more like two people than twins or clones or whatever allows the same guy to be fighting himself (the face is too beautifully realistic to be a universal icon of a person).
  2. could the red tick be a green tick? (and the paper looks a little too distorted - yeah, I'm a realism freak, so ignore me if you disagree!)
  3. this is a terrific winning icon, with a beautiful ribbon, but the thumb looks twisted, and its join to the palm is much too deep of a furrow imo.

@ [thUg]: yours are great (too bad about that cool trophy...), and I don't think they need the dither (though I usually want to defend dithering now and again, I don't think it works here) but could you make each one with a different coloured background pleeease?

@ Calv: the table full of tools is cool, but a bit messy to be readable. If you keep the "X" put it second, and the tick above it. I like the confetti animation (though I never would have thought animations would be allowed) but is it possible to unify your colours a bit? (e.g., Manja's winner icon is also blue red and yellow, but the blue is easily the major piece, and similarly the challenge icon is yellow-ish and the vote icon is green)

It's going to be really hard to chose between these great sets! (especially if any of the above requests are fulfilled )

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Quote Elementy Replybullet Posted: 25 May 2010 at 1:27pm
I finished my set:

Even with Jalonso tips, I prefer the icons to be like that. It's simple and clean, and, imo, fits better to the site laylout.

I also did a preview so you can see how it looks on the main page:


EDIT: Oh yeah, I forget that there is gonna be a new laylout. But I assume it will be simple as the actual, right?

Edited by Elementy - 25 May 2010 at 1:37pm
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 25 May 2010 at 1:34pm
@Elementy, It's not what jalonso said. jalonso only posted the consensus of the entire Mod team for those who wish to edit-remake or take into consideration. No one is being told they have to do anything other than what they wish to do. Dawn decided not to remake 2 and manja likes his fist. No set will be perfect for everyone. I was just trying to provide some input on what we have been discussing.

Your set was an early choice and who knows it may still come to life. The reason we kinda pulled away is because the coloring style of other sets is more complex and we felt it would encourage better quality pixelling in challenge entries. Not that there is anything wrong with simple pixelly pixels like your set. Everyone loves that and your set really is great, cept that 4th place mini ribbon on the 3rd icon :p
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Quote Manjaman Replybullet Posted: 25 May 2010 at 4:13pm
Soooo,
I'm here with a few edits : I think i have fixed the legibility issue keeping the light effect i wanted, and I tried to turn the bg drastically simpler (i used complementary colors to give more punch to each icone but i personally prefer the sallow shade in the second set).




Also I couldn't decide about the big pixels/broken pieces of the band.
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Quote Psychotic_Carp Replybullet Posted: 25 May 2010 at 5:45pm
i started making one i havent changed the text yet and I might need a diff background



I mostly just needed something to do
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Quote Manjaman Replybullet Posted: 25 May 2010 at 6:30pm
Well you should create a new stuff and not just edit one of your former icons.
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 25 May 2010 at 6:35pm
@Manja, the simpler versions work really well, great update!

Originally posted by Psychotic_Carp

...i started making one...


OMG! crapcarp, long time no see <3.
I'm so happy to see you making something for this. You are the best icon maker and I've said this to you for years now. When this comp was started I thought of you and didn't think you ever visited anymore. Please note that trophies won't work for this, its ribbons that are given out.


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Quote Psychotic_Carp Replybullet Posted: 25 May 2010 at 7:13pm
Originally posted by jalonso

<3.I'm so happy to see you making something for this. You are the best icon maker and I've said this to you for years now. When this comp was started I thought of you and didn't think you ever visited anymore. Please note that trophies won't work for this, its ribbons that are given out.


thank you very much sir!!!!!!! I stop by here and there I have even made some pixel art but i just havent been getting into, I think the pixel artist comp made me feel like i was kicked in the nards if i can get the juices rolling ill try to do different ones but im thinking the ones that will win have already been posted
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Quote Calv Replybullet Posted: 25 May 2010 at 11:05pm


Changed the text and altered the tick.  Let me know what you guys think.




Also done using [thug]s text


Edited by Calv - 26 May 2010 at 1:54am
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Quote DawnBringer Replybullet Posted: 26 May 2010 at 7:36am
So...tried adding a hand to the voting-icon (always felt it was kind of empty & cheap anyways). A few tweaks here and there.



(edit: oops, I see there's a wrong color pixel on the last e in "challenge", I'll fix that if needed.)


Edited by DawnBringer - 26 May 2010 at 7:42am
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Quote Manjaman Replybullet Posted: 26 May 2010 at 10:48am
Another update 
There you go :
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 26 May 2010 at 10:59am
Thank you all for your work, time and involvement in helping PJ be the best it can be. The PJ Staff/Mod Team has decided to go with Manjaman's icon set because it best represented the 3 icon concepts by one artist.

To those who participated with an entire set, an award has been added to your profile
Manjaman  - gold star

Jinn  - silver star
This award is because Jinn created a set of icons we needed and hadn't even asked for yet…spooky

In no particular order:  - bronze star
Mis-BUG
Setzer 
Elementy 
iMoose 
Jeremy 
DawnBringer 
KORCHA 
Hiuru 
Calv 
[thUg]

*please do not submit your entries to your gallery (if you were going to) until PJv2.5 is launched, thx :)

The official page is here


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Quote Manjaman Replybullet Posted: 26 May 2010 at 11:14am
Thank you so much ! and special thanks to you jal, your help has been invaluable.
( and tell the staff they are bitches to satisfy -not sure it makes sens in english but you'll understand-)


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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 26 May 2010 at 11:33am
No thank you for taking the staff requests for those final edits and tweaks...

...bitches?!?!...why thank you, we usually hear Nazi

@All, Stars in profiles now + The official page is here
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