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[thUg]
Seaman ![]() ![]() Joined: 12 November 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 22 |
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Finaly but can't choose BG dithering or not.
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skamocore
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3866 |
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Without, but maybe AA the circular background.
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jalonso
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |
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Those are so good and have to be seriously considered. My only crit is that weekly challenges are not trophy comps. They are ribbon comps. Seems like that's a major flaw.
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Manjaman
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 02 October 2016 Location: France Online Status: Offline Posts: 92 |
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The hands could be refined a bit (fingers of the second icone and thumb of the third one), but this is pretty awesome ! Your should use less contrast in the bg also, maybe darken the lighter blues.
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jalonso
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |
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Lots of great sets by all but they all have things that can make them better.
We were down to 2 icon sets but we now have complete input and so this is the consensus. While one of these 4 sets will be used. If you have not yet made a set but want to be considered use these comments below as guidelines. These icons will be used every week so please pixel cleanly ![]() For the challenge icon we like Dawn's 'face to face' idea because it says challenge clearer than the other ideas. [tHug]s hands design can also work. For the voting icon Manjaman and [tHug]s way of showing is best. For the winner icon we like the podium idea as presented by Calv and Manja. The subtle animation on Calv's really makes it pop and we love that! The typography used by [tHug] is the simplest but is the best option. Clean, sharp and legible. ![]() A- Manjaman The Main objection to your set is the BGs. They have too much contrast and are somewhat dark. Maybe making it very subtle and light. In your set we'd love to see a new #1 using faces, like Dawn's or hands like [tHug]s. Your type is a little hard to read (less colors on that?). B- [tHug] Our Main objection is the background making the icons hard to read. Maybe softening those up. Challenges are ribbon comps so a trophy should not be used in the winners icon. C- Calv We think your voting icon is not very positive cuz the X is kinda negative (nitpicking), Highlight the 'yes' checkmark. The challenge idea really is awesome and the best but its also a lot to process for an icon, which is why we like the simpler face to face design. The animation on winners is perfect. Your type is too hard to read. D- DawnBringer The faces just don't match the other 2 icons and the dithering style is kinda crazy for icons. Your type is nice. |
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KORCHA
Seaman ![]() ![]() Joined: 23 December 2015 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 10 |
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@jalonsoaw
the trophy could emphasize on winning right? Well regardless of that minor flaw and for competitions sake, it's finished. Enjoy: ![]() edit: uh we posted at the same time. Edited by KORCHA - 25 May 2010 at 7:57am |
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Calv
Seaman ![]() ![]() Joined: 08 October 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 7 |
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Shall I redo the text and tweek the voting one. I'll make a box instead of a cross. I don't like the text on mine either :P
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jalonso
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |
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We'd much rather have the set made by just one person, so yes, if you could rework the challenge (faces) and voting (positive attitude) and type (cleaner and simpler) that would be awesome.
@KORCHA, hehe, your set is too soft and hard to read (nice pixelling job tho). No trophies :( Edited by jalonso - 25 May 2010 at 8:15am |
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Manjaman
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 02 October 2016 Location: France Online Status: Offline Posts: 92 |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hope the text is more legible. I'm quite disappointed you don't like the challenge icone, i find it punchy (haha). I'll try other solutions, but i feel uncomfortable using others'ideas =/ |
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jalonso
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |
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Oh I love the hand itself. I don't have a problem but its not just me choosing :p
I do like those big pixels removed even though to me it looked like the hand was breaking the top panel, anyhoo... As for the using other's ideas. I don't see why this would or should be a problem. Its like an Art Director overseeing a project and the Creatives fitting the project specs. Your call, we are really thankful so many of you participated in this. |
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DawnBringer
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 11 August 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 568 |
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Alrighty-o. Made an update, changed the faces and hands into a more uniform style. Thinned out the lines a bit. Completed AA. Balanced the red bkg-colors. Added shadow to the vote-sheet. Not sure about the pencil (the big one is not centered). Also, smiles might be more positive?
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Ninja Crow
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@ Manjaman: I love yours a lot, though they have the most difficult to read font I'm afraid.
@ DawnBringer: I really feel like a different colour scheme should be a requirement for the challenge, and I'm glad yours does that so well.
@ [thUg]: yours are great (too bad about that cool trophy...), and I don't think they need the dither (though I usually want to defend dithering now and again, I don't think it works here) but could you make each one with a different coloured background pleeease? @ Calv: the table full of tools is cool, but a bit messy to be readable. If you keep the "X" put it second, and the tick above it. I like the confetti animation (though I never would have thought animations would be allowed) but is it possible to unify your colours a bit? (e.g., Manja's winner icon is also blue red and yellow, but the blue is easily the major piece, and similarly the challenge icon is yellow-ish and the vote icon is green) It's going to be really hard to chose between these great sets! (especially if any of the above requests are fulfilled ![]() |
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Elementy
Seaman ![]() Joined: 08 June 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 9 |
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I finished my set:
![]() Even with Jalonso tips, I prefer the icons to be like that. It's simple and clean, and, imo, fits better to the site laylout. I also did a preview so you can see how it looks on the main page: ![]() EDIT: Oh yeah, I forget that there is gonna be a new laylout. But I assume it will be simple as the actual, right? ![]() Edited by Elementy - 25 May 2010 at 1:37pm |
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jalonso
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |
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@Elementy, It's not what jalonso said. jalonso only posted the consensus of the entire Mod team for those who wish to edit-remake or take into consideration. No one is being told they have to do anything other than what they wish to do. Dawn decided not to remake 2 and manja likes his fist. No set will be perfect for everyone. I was just trying to provide some input on what we have been discussing.
Your set was an early choice and who knows it may still come to life. The reason we kinda pulled away is because the coloring style of other sets is more complex and we felt it would encourage better quality pixelling in challenge entries. Not that there is anything wrong with simple pixelly pixels like your set. Everyone loves that and your set really is great, cept that 4th place mini ribbon on the 3rd icon :p |
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Manjaman
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 02 October 2016 Location: France Online Status: Offline Posts: 92 |
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Soooo,
I'm here with a few edits : I think i have fixed the legibility issue keeping the light effect i wanted, and I tried to turn the bg drastically simpler (i used complementary colors to give more punch to each icone but i personally prefer the sallow shade in the second set). ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Also I couldn't decide about the big pixels/broken pieces of the band. |
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Psychotic_Carp
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 02 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1008 |
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i started making one i havent changed the text yet and I might need a diff background
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Manjaman
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 02 October 2016 Location: France Online Status: Offline Posts: 92 |
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Well you should create a new stuff and not just edit one of your former icons.
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jalonso
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |
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@Manja, the simpler versions work really well, great update!
Originally posted by Psychotic_Carp ...i started making one... OMG! ![]() I'm so happy to see you making something for this. You are the best icon maker and I've said this to you for years now. When this comp was started I thought of you and didn't think you ever visited anymore. Please note that trophies won't work for this, its ribbons that are given out. Edited by jalonso - 25 May 2010 at 6:47pm |
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Psychotic_Carp
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 02 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1008 |
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Originally posted by jalonso
<3.I'm so happy to see you making something for this. You are the best icon maker and I've said this to you for years now. When this comp was started I thought of you and didn't think you ever visited anymore. Please note that trophies won't work for this, its ribbons that are given out. thank you very much sir!!!!!!! I stop by here and there I have even made some pixel art but i just havent been getting into, I think the pixel artist comp made me feel like i was kicked in the nards if i can get the juices rolling ill try to do different ones but im thinking the ones that will win have already been posted |
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Calv
Seaman ![]() ![]() Joined: 08 October 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 7 |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Changed the text and altered the tick. Let me know what you guys think. ![]() ![]() ![]() Also done using [thug]s text ![]() Edited by Calv - 26 May 2010 at 1:54am |
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DawnBringer
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 11 August 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 568 |
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So...tried adding a hand to the voting-icon (always felt it was kind of empty & cheap anyways). A few tweaks here and there.
![]() (edit: oops, I see there's a wrong color pixel on the last e in "challenge", I'll fix that if needed.) Edited by DawnBringer - 26 May 2010 at 7:42am |
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Manjaman
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 02 October 2016 Location: France Online Status: Offline Posts: 92 |
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Another update
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jalonso
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |
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Thank you all for your work, time and involvement in helping PJ be the
best it can be. The PJ Staff/Mod Team has decided to go with Manjaman's
icon set because it best represented the 3 icon concepts by one artist.
To those who participated with an entire set, an award has been added to your profile Manjaman - ![]() Jinn - ![]() This award is because Jinn created a set of icons we needed and hadn't even asked for yet…spooky ![]() In no particular order: - ![]() Mis-BUG Setzer Elementy iMoose Jeremy DawnBringer KORCHA Hiuru Calv [thUg] *please do not submit your entries to your gallery (if you were going to) until PJv2.5 is launched, thx :) The official page is here Edited by jalonso - 26 May 2010 at 11:26am |
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Manjaman
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 02 October 2016 Location: France Online Status: Offline Posts: 92 |
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Thank you so much ! and special thanks to you jal, your help has been invaluable.
( and tell the staff they are bitches to satisfy ![]() Edited by Manjaman - 26 May 2010 at 11:14am |
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jalonso
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |
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No thank you for taking the staff requests for those final edits and tweaks...
...bitches?!?!...why thank you, we usually hear Nazi ![]() @All, Stars in profiles now + The official page is here |
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