Maybe his arm with the staff should be pointing down the line, in the direction the army is walking. It would be more readable as him directing them that way.

Muito Boom,voce ta evoluindo muito ele, mas eu acho que a antiga 'boca' do monstro estava melhor do que as ultimas atualizacoes...

just to see what it would look like. I think it makes more sense.

a3um. Thank you so much. I cant depict whats going on my head. You can do it so better then me. Thanks.

Thank you Mille, I am happy with a3um's edit! I am just having problems with the armt BTW.. THANKS!



Edited by philippejugnet - 03 June 2012 at 6:30pm

Exactly! going to send it to the showcase XD. There is also the concept that those warrior at the left are minions :3


Edited by philippejugnet - 03 June 2012 at 6:57pm

Ah, ok, that's a concept, why not? But then I would love to the see a cool LoL scene, so please add minions and stuff

First off, this is starting to look spectacular.  The composition is definitely improving big time!

Second, maybe it's just me, but I find the color choices a bit odd.  I'm not so sure about the green-grey with the primary oranges.  It comes across as a bit gaudy, and their isn't really unification of color.  Perhaps if the entire piece, notably the greenish sections had some more copper or ochre tones, (Morrowind's case comes to mind) it might look better.  Totally subjective input here, so take it subjectively. 

Lastly, the dithering in the sky just looks weak to me.  It looks pretty nice in the rocks in the lower right, but it is an eyesore and looks out of place in the sky in my opinion, and creates unwanted texture as is typical for bad dithering.

Looks awesome ! Hope you'll finish it soon so that we can fave it :D

The dragon's head looks pretty narrow and flat, and the darkness it faces gives no impression of the depth suggested by the row of warriors on the left.

This is what I mean.

your edit reminded me about this =)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pkWWWKKA8jY

0:40

Thanks night and christoballs! Next edit will be the update.

Like this guys? thanks all. @elk Hey alex, I don't know how to texture it =/



Edited by philippejugnet - 09 June 2012 at 9:01am

Hope you don't get a headache!
Thanks for the help! I will be waiting! Its almolst done.

Hi, you've put a lot of hard work into this and previous work and the major improvements are showing.

I said a few days ago that I'd create an edit, so I sat down and did it. I didn't try to change to much I just want to try an point out a few things.


The main point of the edit was to point out that the dragon looks like he has no waist and hips. Hips will suggest a range of movement, making him look like he's more mobile.

I also think you can use the secondary lights better. You sometimes forget that about the lights from the clouds that would probable hit the dragons back.

Also don't be afraid of contrast! Use the darker colours wisely to make the dragons scales detailed.

I really don't think you need this advise as you're more brave than I am to attempt large pieces like this. haha. Keep it up buddy.

Edited by Jim16 - 13 June 2012 at 1:30pm

better????????

looks awesome a3um

Philippe, you are pretty good at sketching, pixeling and coloring now, you should focus on composition, dynamic and so on, like a3um showed you. But please consider you dragon as finished now and focus on a new piece ;)
As I said, you need to practicve general art technique.