I'm trying to figure out her torso..  which is better:

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Edited by Lendrick - 25 July 2009 at 11:07am

The side view bothers me. The neck is thick, closer to "real" proportions, but the jaw is super-anime-slanted. I'd say either pull the right side of the neck in so the neck is thinner (and thus more keeping with the anime look) or pull the chin out to the right so the face is less anime (and going for a more realism approach)

The shading on both seems to bob around a lot too, particularly the collarbone and stomach highlights on the front view. They seem to kinda randomly pop around in a few frames rather than just shrinking and growing with the movement of the body. Oh, also on the front view, the right arm (our right) seems to go into shadow when it goes back, and then pops out of shadow for a frame, and then goes back into it.


It's coming along though :)