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FelipeFS
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This is my new dinosaur: Spinosaurus;
I will make another species(less known to the lay public). ![]() Edited by FelipeFS - 20 January 2011 at 2:14pm |
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FelipeFS
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UPDATE 1:
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ellie-is
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Por enquanto tá ótimo cara, boa sorte.
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Gecimen
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The scales look cool. Don't know the species so cant really c&c on the anatomy but the perspective of the lower chin might be off.
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jeremy
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Yeah there's something odd with the lower jaw. The whole thing is really angular and shiny, sort of a general light source. It sorta looks like a Spinosaurus skull with covered in latex or something. Soften the curves, block out + better define the shaped is my advice.
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Gecimen
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Omg Jeremy I fell off my chair as I saw the little front view head :D
and yeah it was exactly what I meant. |
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ellie-is
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Hey Jeremy, I agree with you on the lighting, but that thing you removed there wasn't his neck, this dinosaur is supposed to have that... thingie... on his back. I have no idea how it's called. Look here.
As for the jaw anatomy, I see now that something might be off but I don't really see it fixed on yours, I think you edited the wrong part and that he should move the end of it instead, something like t his ![]() But again, I'm sure he knows way more about dinosaur anatomy than we do, so its hard to tell who's right. |
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FelipeFS
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I have to agree about the lighting. Thanks Jeremy.
But the neck was misunderstood. ![]() |
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FelipeFS
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New update:
![]() A Spinosaurus skull for comparison: ![]() Edited by FelipeFS - 01 February 2011 at 3:49pm |
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vlad61
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wow mate that looks amazing!!
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wenruto
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The top Jaw look Cut off And Out of perspective The Lower JAw looks better
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Zeratanus
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Both the top and bottom parts of the mouth are out of perspective with the rest of it. Most of the head is seen very diagonally, close to a 3/4ths view. The mouth is much closer to a profile view.
The inner mouth also doesnt go out at all on the left side when it pokes out dramatically on the right, which could be a lot of the problem with the lower jaw... |
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