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Quote FelipeFS Replybullet Topic: [WIP]Dinosauria - Spinosaurus aegyptiacus
    Posted: 16 January 2011 at 12:32pm
This is my new dinosaur: Spinosaurus;
I will make another species(less known to the lay public).




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Quote FelipeFS Replybullet Posted: 20 January 2011 at 2:14pm
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Quote ellie-is Replybullet Posted: 20 January 2011 at 7:20pm
Por enquanto tá ótimo cara, boa sorte.
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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 21 January 2011 at 2:09am
The scales look cool. Don't know the species so cant really c&c on the anatomy but the perspective of the lower chin might be off.
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Quote jeremy Replybullet Posted: 21 January 2011 at 3:20am
Yeah there's something odd with the lower jaw. The whole thing is really angular and shiny, sort of a general light source. It sorta looks like a Spinosaurus skull with covered in latex or something. Soften the curves, block out + better define the shaped is my advice.
Here's a real (real) quick paintover:

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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 21 January 2011 at 3:47am
Omg Jeremy I fell off my chair as I saw the little front view head :D
and yeah it was exactly what I meant.
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Quote ellie-is Replybullet Posted: 21 January 2011 at 8:14am
Hey Jeremy, I agree with you on the lighting, but that thing you removed there wasn't his neck, this dinosaur is supposed to have that... thingie... on his back. I have no idea how it's called. Look here.

As for the jaw anatomy, I see now that something might be off but I don't really see it fixed on yours, I think you edited the wrong part and that he should move the end of it instead, something like t his

But again, I'm sure he knows way more about dinosaur anatomy than we do, so its hard to tell who's right.
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Quote FelipeFS Replybullet Posted: 21 January 2011 at 10:17am
I have to agree about the lighting. Thanks Jeremy.

But the neck was misunderstood.



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Quote FelipeFS Replybullet Posted: 01 February 2011 at 3:25pm
New update:


A Spinosaurus skull for comparison:



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Quote vlad61 Replybullet Posted: 01 February 2011 at 6:34pm
wow mate that looks amazing!!
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Quote wenruto Replybullet Posted: 02 February 2011 at 12:32am
The top Jaw look Cut off And Out of perspective The Lower JAw looks better
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Quote Zeratanus Replybullet Posted: 03 February 2011 at 6:42am
Both the top and bottom parts of the mouth are out of perspective with the rest of it. Most of the head is seen very diagonally, close to a 3/4ths view. The mouth is much closer to a profile view.

The inner mouth also doesnt go out at all on the left side when it pokes out dramatically on the right, which could be a lot of the problem with the lower jaw...
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