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Unhero
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Topic: [WIP] Two girl dolls [closed]
Posted: 17 May 2011 at 12:19am

Say, that you thik about this dolls?

p.s. for admins, this topic can be closed

Edited by Unhero - 25 May 2011 at 10:47am

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Unhero
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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 6:11am

modified source of red girl

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cure
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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 8:17am

So are these WIPs, that you plan to continue working on, or finished pieces that you don't plan on editing further? If they're WIPs, then you shouldn't have submitted them to the gallery yet. If they're finished, then they should be in a single gallery entry, and this WIP thread is pointless.

these have improved since the first version I saw. Skin is a bit too yellow. blue girl's skirt could use more folds/texture. I think it's odd how the highlight on her chest is split down the middle. the tall eyes look kinda like cat eyes. the bodies are still kinda boxy/stick-like, having more organic, womanly curves would help.

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 9:37am

Cure, thanks for your advice, the first two in my opinion are over, but since I'm inexperienced, and therefore appeal to you to listen to criticism

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 10:00am

Do you think this color would be better? And tell me or show me how to win in the quadratic curves, that occurs to me only an increase in pictures

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Unhero
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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 11:06am

redraw blue, better?

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cure
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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 3:29pm

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Unhero
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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 10:23pm

Cure, good job, thanks a lot, will train on

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 12:20am

Cure, refine with your example

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Alex Pang
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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 3:00am

It has to much noice on her shirt, you should fix it.

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Unhero
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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 9:56am

Alex Pang, how do you this version?

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 4:27pm

Proportions. Basically lengths from top of head to crotch and from crotch to feet are the same.
With bigger head proportions are harder to measure right, but at this state I think everything should be further calibrated, moved and seen if it will make for better.
As for skin color - regular MS Paint orange, but with increased brightness usually looks good enough.

Edited by A.B. Lazer - 24 May 2011 at 4:32pm

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 10:06pm

A.B.Lazer, thanks, I will consider in a following drawing

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Unhero Midshipman Joined: 11 May 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 87	Topic: [WIP] Two girl dolls [closed] Posted: 17 May 2011 at 12:19am
	Say, that you thik about this dolls? p.s. for admins, this topic can be closed Edited by Unhero - 25 May 2011 at 10:47am
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Unhero Midshipman Joined: 11 May 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 87	Posted: 17 May 2011 at 6:11am
	modified source of red girl
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cure Commander Joined: 23 March 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2859	Posted: 17 May 2011 at 8:17am
	So are these WIPs, that you plan to continue working on, or finished pieces that you don't plan on editing further? If they're WIPs, then you shouldn't have submitted them to the gallery yet. If they're finished, then they should be in a single gallery entry, and this WIP thread is pointless. these have improved since the first version I saw. Skin is a bit too yellow. blue girl's skirt could use more folds/texture. I think it's odd how the highlight on her chest is split down the middle. the tall eyes look kinda like cat eyes. the bodies are still kinda boxy/stick-like, having more organic, womanly curves would help.
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Unhero Midshipman Joined: 11 May 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 87	Posted: 17 May 2011 at 9:37am
	Cure, thanks for your advice, the first two in my opinion are over, but since I'm inexperienced, and therefore appeal to you to listen to criticism
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Unhero Midshipman Joined: 11 May 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 87	Posted: 17 May 2011 at 10:00am
	Do you think this color would be better? And tell me or show me how to win in the quadratic curves, that occurs to me only an increase in pictures
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Unhero Midshipman Joined: 11 May 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 87	Posted: 17 May 2011 at 11:06am
	redraw blue, better?
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cure Commander Joined: 23 March 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2859	Posted: 17 May 2011 at 3:29pm

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Unhero Midshipman Joined: 11 May 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 87	Posted: 17 May 2011 at 10:23pm
	Cure, good job, thanks a lot, will train on
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Unhero Midshipman Joined: 11 May 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 87	Posted: 18 May 2011 at 12:20am
	Cure, refine with your example
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Alex Pang Commander Joined: 23 February 2025 Online Status: Offline Posts: 224	Posted: 21 May 2011 at 3:00am
	It has to much noice on her shirt, you should fix it.
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Unhero Midshipman Joined: 11 May 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 87	Posted: 22 May 2011 at 9:56am
	Alex Pang, how do you this version?
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A.B. Lazer Commander Joined: 21 July 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 310	Posted: 24 May 2011 at 4:27pm
	Proportions. Basically lengths from top of head to crotch and from crotch to feet are the same. With bigger head proportions are harder to measure right, but at this state I think everything should be further calibrated, moved and seen if it will make for better. As for skin color - regular MS Paint orange, but with increased brightness usually looks good enough. Edited by A.B. Lazer - 24 May 2011 at 4:32pm
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Unhero Midshipman Joined: 11 May 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 87	Posted: 24 May 2011 at 10:06pm
	A.B.Lazer, thanks, I will consider in a following drawing
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