[WIP] Two girl dolls [closed]
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Topic: [WIP] Two girl dolls [closed]
Posted By: Unhero
Subject: [WIP] Two girl dolls [closed]
Date Posted: 17 May 2011 at 12:19am
Say, that you thik about this dolls?  p.s. for admins, this topic can be closed |
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Posted By: Unhero
Date Posted: 17 May 2011 at 6:11am
modified source of red girl |
Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 17 May 2011 at 8:17am
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So are these WIPs, that you plan to continue working on, or finished pieces that you don't plan on editing further? If they're WIPs, then you shouldn't have submitted them to the gallery yet. If they're finished, then they should be in a single gallery entry, and this WIP thread is pointless. these have improved since the first version I saw. Skin is a bit too yellow. blue girl's skirt could use more folds/texture. I think it's odd how the highlight on her chest is split down the middle. the tall eyes look kinda like cat eyes. the bodies are still kinda boxy/stick-like, having more organic, womanly curves would help. |
Posted By: Unhero
Date Posted: 17 May 2011 at 9:37am
Cure, thanks for your advice, the first two in my opinion are over, but since I'm inexperienced, and therefore appeal to you to listen to criticism
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Posted By: Unhero
Date Posted: 17 May 2011 at 10:00am
Do you think this color would be better? And tell me or show me how to win in the quadratic curves, that occurs to me only an increase in pictures
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Posted By: Unhero
Date Posted: 17 May 2011 at 11:06am
redraw blue, better? |
Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 17 May 2011 at 3:29pm
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Posted By: Unhero
Date Posted: 17 May 2011 at 10:23pm
Cure, good job, thanks a lot, will train on 
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Posted By: Unhero
Date Posted: 18 May 2011 at 12:20am
Cure, refine with your example 
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Posted By: Alex Pang
Date Posted: 21 May 2011 at 3:00am
| It has to much noice on her shirt, you should fix it. |
Posted By: Unhero
Date Posted: 22 May 2011 at 9:56am
Alex Pang, how do you this version? |
Posted By: A.B. Lazer
Date Posted: 24 May 2011 at 4:27pm
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Proportions. Basically lengths from top of head to crotch and from crotch to feet are the same.
With bigger head proportions are harder to measure right, but at this state I think everything should be further calibrated, moved and seen if it will make for better. As for skin color - regular MS Paint orange, but with increased brightness usually looks good enough. |
Posted By: Unhero
Date Posted: 24 May 2011 at 10:06pm
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A.B.Lazer, thanks, I will consider in a following drawing
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