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Zizka
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Quote Zizka Replybullet Topic: Hero Character: Tear It Apart
    Posted: 08 October 2011 at 7:57am
Hello guys,

Could you tell me everything wrong about this character please?

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I'm pretty sure that it's not high level enough to deserve replies and criticism but it would certainly be appreciated.

Thank you for reading.

EDIT: The sprite is from a friend of mine, sriden. I wanted to lend him a hand by finding places to provide feedback for his sprite.


Edited by Zizka - 09 October 2011 at 8:40am
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Quote CELS Replybullet Posted: 08 October 2011 at 8:27am
I don't know if this is better, but it's my take on it, at least. And I managed to reduce the color count from 16 to 15 - yay.



I tried to improve the face a little bit (the shadow pixels on either side of the throat almost looks like eyes), increase the general contrast a bit and show the light source more clearly on the clothes and face.

By the way, you don't have to post zoomed-in versions of your pixel art. People can zoom in by clicking your picture.
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Quote ChrisButton Replybullet Posted: 08 October 2011 at 3:57pm
And zoom out by holding control THEN clicking the picture. :-) 
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Quote onek Replybullet Posted: 08 October 2011 at 5:29pm
heres my try on an edit in three different version... without outline, outlined, selective outline....

colors reduced to 6 in all versions...




EDIT: oops, forgot to mirror it again....

Edited by onek - 08 October 2011 at 6:09pm
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