Pixel Joint Forum: Hero Character: Tear It Apart

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Hello guys,

Could you tell me everything wrong about this character please?

Before

After

I'm pretty sure that it's not high level enough to deserve replies and criticism but it would certainly be appreciated. 

Thank you for reading.

EDIT: The sprite is from a friend of mine, sriden. I wanted to lend him a hand by finding places to provide feedback for his sprite.

Edited by Zizka - 09 October 2011 at 8:40am

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Zizka Commander Joined: 07 May 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 139	Topic: Hero Character: Tear It Apart Posted: 08 October 2011 at 7:57am
	Hello guys, Could you tell me everything wrong about this character please? Before After I'm pretty sure that it's not high level enough to deserve replies and criticism but it would certainly be appreciated. Thank you for reading. EDIT: The sprite is from a friend of mine, sriden. I wanted to lend him a hand by finding places to provide feedback for his sprite. Edited by Zizka - 09 October 2011 at 8:40am
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CELS Commander Joined: 23 September 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 758	Posted: 08 October 2011 at 8:27am
	I don't know if this is better, but it's my take on it, at least. And I managed to reduce the color count from 16 to 15 - yay. I tried to improve the face a little bit (the shadow pixels on either side of the throat almost looks like eyes), increase the general contrast a bit and show the light source more clearly on the clothes and face. By the way, you don't have to post zoomed-in versions of your pixel art. People can zoom in by clicking your picture.
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ChrisButton Commander Joined: 10 September 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 371	Posted: 08 October 2011 at 3:57pm
	And zoom out by holding control THEN clicking the picture. :-)
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onek Commander Joined: 19 May 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 416	Posted: 08 October 2011 at 5:29pm
	heres my try on an edit in three different version... without outline, outlined, selective outline.... colors reduced to 6 in all versions... EDIT: oops, forgot to mirror it again.... Edited by onek - 08 October 2011 at 6:09pm
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