Hero Character: Tear It Apart
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 22 February 2026 at 5:38pm
Topic: Hero Character: Tear It Apart
Posted By: Zizka
Subject: Hero Character: Tear It Apart
Date Posted: 08 October 2011 at 7:57am
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Hello guys, Could you tell me everything wrong about this character please? Before  After  I'm pretty sure that it's not high level enough to deserve replies and criticism but it would certainly be appreciated. Thank you for reading. EDIT: The sprite is from a friend of mine, sriden. I wanted to lend him a hand by finding places to provide feedback for his sprite. |
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Posted By: CELS
Date Posted: 08 October 2011 at 8:27am
I don't know if this is better, but it's my take on it, at least. And I managed to reduce the color count from 16 to 15 - yay. I tried to improve the face a little bit (the shadow pixels on either side of the throat almost looks like eyes), increase the general contrast a bit and show the light source more clearly on the clothes and face. By the way, you don't have to post zoomed-in versions of your pixel art. People can zoom in by clicking your picture. |
Posted By: ChrisButton
Date Posted: 08 October 2011 at 3:57pm
| And zoom out by holding control THEN clicking the picture. :-) |
Posted By: onek
Date Posted: 08 October 2011 at 5:29pm
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heres my try on an edit in three different version... without outline, outlined, selective outline....
colors reduced to 6 in all versions... 
EDIT: oops, forgot to mirror it again.... |