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Quote tuaarita Replybullet Topic: Moths on a flame (dropped:)
    Posted: 20 July 2012 at 2:55pm
No moths yet. No flame either. I think I'll be going for a little animation.



Man I suck at clusters.


Okay looking a bit better now. Added the border to make it easier on the eyes at least while it's still a WIP. I always loved the idea of the picture 'bleeding' out too.


reference http://i.imgur.com/WqyPt.jpg

Edited by Leroy - 26 July 2012 at 11:36am
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running in to the sun,
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Quote tzen Replybullet Posted: 20 July 2012 at 4:31pm
I'm not sure if it's proper advice, but I'd try to bring the blue down into the foreground foliage so there isn't such a stark separation.

Maybe make the sky more of a gradient with it being a little darker at the top.

Edit: The trees in the background don't really blend with the style of the foreground, either.

Is the lightsource in your image the same as in your reference?


Edited by tzen - 20 July 2012 at 4:38pm
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