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Quote skeddles Replybullet Topic: Crit my Wirefram run animation before I do more
    Posted: 10 September 2012 at 3:44pm


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Quote shampoop Replybullet Posted: 10 September 2012 at 4:22pm
I wounder if the black leg reaches out enough?
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Quote Zeratanus Replybullet Posted: 10 September 2012 at 4:25pm
What you have now looks more like a jog up some stairs. In a run, the legs get kicked back, and there are gaps where neither foot is on the ground.It also  involves the whole body, not just the legs and arms, with the character leaning into the run, and the body pumping side to side along with the arms.

My own work's far from perfect, but here's an run that I've made in the past for an example:
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