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please tell me if anything looks weird or wonky, edits welcomed. 

Edited by skeddles - 16 April 2013 at 11:26am

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skeddles Commander Joined: 22 April 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 635	Topic: Adventure time Posted: 15 April 2013 at 12:32pm
	please tell me if anything looks weird or wonky, edits welcomed. Edited by skeddles - 16 April 2013 at 11:26am

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PAMVllo Seaman Joined: 05 July 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13	Posted: 15 April 2013 at 1:40pm
	Looking good! no weird thing...well, there's no shading yet
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skeddles Commander Joined: 22 April 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 635	Posted: 16 April 2013 at 11:23am
	added 2 more characters and cleaned up lines, I'm going to go with pretty simple cell shading

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jalonso Admiral Joined: 14 June 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 16 April 2013 at 11:44am
	You've come such a long way o.O
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gkmero Midshipman Joined: 14 July 2017 Online Status: Offline Posts: 45	Posted: 16 April 2013 at 6:57pm
	Looking really good! My only little bother was with Finn's head shape. Finn's head is usually pretty boxy. Quick edit: I tried scaling back some of those curves.
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r1k Commander Joined: 01 April 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 336	Posted: 16 April 2013 at 9:08pm
	the shadows are kind of light and unnoticable. I think you should either make them darker or get rid of them. Its kind of wierd how ice kings nose ends right at jake, like ice king is scratching jakes ear with his nose. I would try using some AA or maybe not using 1 pixel thick outlines everywhere.
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skeddles Commander Joined: 22 April 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 635	Posted: 17 April 2013 at 8:05am
	Thanks for the comments, I'm on phone so I can't fully respond I worked Finn a little and gave peebles shading and aa and sh*t. Too much aa? Sometimes I do too much update : S update again : Edited by skeddles - 17 April 2013 at 12:17pm

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ProtoAstron Seaman Joined: 16 April 2013 Online Status: Offline Posts: 7	Posted: 17 April 2013 at 12:19pm
	The picture overall looks like it has varying art styles, but it kinda works. I preferred finn in the second draft, though his face was a little long in it. I think pb's head should be more circular and slightly smaller. The colors are spot on though. Like r1k said ice kings nose creates a fused edge with jake, which creates a crowded sensation. But other than that great work on iceking, jake, gunther, and peppermint butler.
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skeddles Commander Joined: 22 April 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 635	Posted: 17 April 2013 at 12:29pm
	*Originally posted by ProtoAstron* The picture overall looks like it has varying art styles, but it kinda works. I preferred finn in the second draft, though his face was a little long in it. I think pb's head should be more circular and slightly smaller. The colors are spot on though. Like r1k said ice kings nose creates a fused edge with jake, which creates a crowded sensation. But other than that great work on iceking, jake, gunther, and peppermint butler. that's one of my biggest problems, that my style isn't solid, and I would like to fix it but don't know how. I moved ice king to make his nose not touch at the point, but guess it didn't work. I'll make it straighter. How y'all gonna make me change finns head back?!

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Occillo Seaman Joined: 13 April 2013 Online Status: Offline Posts: 30	Posted: 17 April 2013 at 3:34pm
	You could redraw his head or just reposition/scale using photoshop etc. It's nice watching a piece come together, keep it up.
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ProtoAstron Seaman Joined: 16 April 2013 Online Status: Offline Posts: 7	Posted: 17 April 2013 at 3:59pm
	Finn's eyes are small and solid like ice king's and pb's. That could be one reason for inconstant style perhaps.
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skeddles Commander Joined: 22 April 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 635	Posted: 18 April 2013 at 10:20am
	Which palette is better

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Friend Commander Joined: 01 April 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 710	Posted: 18 April 2013 at 10:53am
	I like the first more. Better contrast
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Occillo Seaman Joined: 13 April 2013 Online Status: Offline Posts: 30	Posted: 18 April 2013 at 11:14am
	The change in Ice King's nose and Finn's eyes definitely made a lot of difference. BMO'S face colour looks a lot better in the second. But I prefer Gunther's eyes and Ice King's crown in the first. Nice work on the background, its detailed but subtle at the same time. (p.s good job on the snail)
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ProtoAstron Seaman Joined: 16 April 2013 Online Status: Offline Posts: 7	Posted: 18 April 2013 at 12:18pm
	Great background. I prefer the first pallete but the second for BMO.
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