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Quote skeddles Replybullet Topic: Adventure time
    Posted: 15 April 2013 at 12:32pm


please tell me if anything looks weird or wonky, edits welcomed.

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Quote PAMVllo Replybullet Posted: 15 April 2013 at 1:40pm
Looking good! no weird thing...well, there's no shading yet
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Quote skeddles Replybullet Posted: 16 April 2013 at 11:23am


added 2 more characters and cleaned up lines, I'm going to go with pretty simple cell shading


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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 16 April 2013 at 11:44am

You've come such a long way o.O

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Quote gkmero Replybullet Posted: 16 April 2013 at 6:57pm

Looking really good! My only little bother was with Finn's head shape. Finn's head is usually pretty boxy.

Quick edit:

I tried scaling back some of those curves.

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Quote r1k Replybullet Posted: 16 April 2013 at 9:08pm
the shadows are kind of light and unnoticable.  I think you should either make them darker or get rid of them.  Its kind of wierd how ice kings nose ends right at jake, like ice king is scratching jakes ear with his nose.  I would try using some AA or maybe not using 1 pixel thick outlines everywhere.
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Quote skeddles Replybullet Posted: 17 April 2013 at 8:05am
Thanks for the comments, I'm on phone so I can't fully respond

I worked Finn a little and gave peebles shading and aa and sh*t. Too much aa? Sometimes I do too much



update :
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update again :



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Quote ProtoAstron Replybullet Posted: 17 April 2013 at 12:19pm
The picture overall looks like it has varying art styles, but it kinda works.
I preferred finn in the second draft, though his face was a little long in it.
I think pb's head should be more circular and slightly smaller. The colors are spot on though.
Like r1k said ice kings nose creates a fused edge with jake, which creates a crowded sensation. But other than that great work on iceking, jake, gunther, and peppermint butler.
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Quote skeddles Replybullet Posted: 17 April 2013 at 12:29pm
Originally posted by ProtoAstron

The picture overall looks like it has varying art styles, but it kinda works.
I preferred finn in the second draft, though his face was a little long in it.
I think pb's head should be more circular and slightly smaller. The colors are spot on though.
Like r1k said ice kings nose creates a fused edge with jake, which creates a crowded sensation. But other than that great work on iceking, jake, gunther, and peppermint butler.


that's one of my biggest problems, that my style isn't solid, and I would like to fix it but don't know how.

I moved ice king to make his nose not touch at the point, but guess it didn't work. I'll make it straighter.

How y'all gonna make me change finns head back?!


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Quote Occillo Replybullet Posted: 17 April 2013 at 3:34pm
You could redraw his head or just reposition/scale using photoshop etc.

It's nice watching a piece come together, keep it up.
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Quote ProtoAstron Replybullet Posted: 17 April 2013 at 3:59pm

Finn's eyes are small and solid like ice king's and pb's. That could be one reason for inconstant style perhaps.
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Quote skeddles Replybullet Posted: 18 April 2013 at 10:20am
Which palette is better



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Quote Friend Replybullet Posted: 18 April 2013 at 10:53am
I like the first more. Better contrast
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Quote Occillo Replybullet Posted: 18 April 2013 at 11:14am
The change in Ice King's nose and Finn's eyes definitely made a lot of difference.

BMO'S face colour looks a lot better in the second. But I prefer Gunther's eyes and Ice King's crown in the first.

Nice work on the background, its detailed but subtle at the same time.

(p.s good job on the snail)
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Quote ProtoAstron Replybullet Posted: 18 April 2013 at 12:18pm
Great background. I prefer the first pallete but the second for BMO.
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