Adventure time
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Printed Date: 08 September 2025 at 1:30am
Topic: Adventure time
Posted By: skeddles
Subject: Adventure time
Date Posted: 15 April 2013 at 12:32pm
please tell me if anything looks weird or wonky, edits welcomed. ------------- |
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Posted By: PAMVllo
Date Posted: 15 April 2013 at 1:40pm
| Looking good! no weird thing...well, there's no shading yet |
Posted By: skeddles
Date Posted: 16 April 2013 at 11:23am
added 2 more characters and cleaned up lines, I'm going to go with pretty simple cell shading ------------- |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 16 April 2013 at 11:44am
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You've come such a long way o.O ------------- |
Posted By: gkmero
Date Posted: 16 April 2013 at 6:57pm
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Looking really good! My only little bother was with Finn's head shape. Finn's head is usually pretty boxy. Quick edit:
I tried scaling back some of those curves. |
Posted By: r1k
Date Posted: 16 April 2013 at 9:08pm
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the shadows are kind of light and unnoticable. I think you should either make them darker or get rid of them. Its kind of wierd how ice kings nose ends right at jake, like ice king is scratching jakes ear with his nose. I would try using some AA or maybe not using 1 pixel thick outlines everywhere. |
Posted By: skeddles
Date Posted: 17 April 2013 at 8:05am
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Thanks for the comments, I'm on phone so I can't fully respond
I worked Finn a little and gave peebles shading and aa and sh*t. Too much aa? Sometimes I do too much 
update : S 
update again : ------------- |
Posted By: ProtoAstron
Date Posted: 17 April 2013 at 12:19pm
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The picture overall looks like it has varying art styles, but it kinda works.
I preferred finn in the second draft, though his face was a little long in it. I think pb's head should be more circular and slightly smaller. The colors are spot on though. Like r1k said ice kings nose creates a fused edge with jake, which creates a crowded sensation. But other than that great work on iceking, jake, gunther, and peppermint butler. |
Posted By: skeddles
Date Posted: 17 April 2013 at 12:29pm
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Originally posted by ProtoAstron
The picture overall looks like it has varying art styles, but it kinda works. I preferred finn in the second draft, though his face was a little long in it. I think pb's head should be more circular and slightly smaller. The colors are spot on though. Like r1k said ice kings nose creates a fused edge with jake, which creates a crowded sensation. But other than that great work on iceking, jake, gunther, and peppermint butler. that's one of my biggest problems, that my style isn't solid, and I would like to fix it but don't know how. I moved ice king to make his nose not touch at the point, but guess it didn't work. I'll make it straighter. How y'all gonna make me change finns head back?! ------------- |
Posted By: Occillo
Date Posted: 17 April 2013 at 3:34pm
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You could redraw his head or just reposition/scale using photoshop etc.
It's nice watching a piece come together, keep it up. |
Posted By: ProtoAstron
Date Posted: 17 April 2013 at 3:59pm
Finn's eyes are small and solid like ice king's and pb's. That could be one reason for inconstant style perhaps. |
Posted By: skeddles
Date Posted: 18 April 2013 at 10:20am
Which palette is better
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Posted By: Friend
Date Posted: 18 April 2013 at 10:53am
| I like the first more. Better contrast |
Posted By: Occillo
Date Posted: 18 April 2013 at 11:14am
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The change in Ice King's nose and Finn's eyes definitely made a lot of difference.
BMO'S face colour looks a lot better in the second. But I prefer Gunther's eyes and Ice King's crown in the first. Nice work on the background, its detailed but subtle at the same time. (p.s good job on the snail) |
Posted By: ProtoAstron
Date Posted: 18 April 2013 at 12:18pm
| Great background. I prefer the first pallete but the second for BMO. |