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plaza
Midshipman ![]() Joined: 27 March 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 14 |
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Here's my bird animation so far. I might add some colour to make it really stand out. The animation seems okay, but I think there's a few lines that need correcting.
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coolsarahkry
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 23 June 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 90 |
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Wow, those wings look really good.
Maybe make the body move up and down slightly with the flap of the wings, right now it is a little stiff. |
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plaza
Midshipman ![]() Joined: 27 March 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 14 |
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Great ideas - here's a small edit.
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plaza
Midshipman ![]() Joined: 27 March 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 14 |
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And another slight adjustment
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NancyGold
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 27 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 526 |
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Good wings animation, but the chest appears to be shifted to the left. Legs are hanging like the bird prepares to land or they are just broken. Tail could use some work too as doesn't correspond to your chosen angle of view, and looks a bit puny. The beak has some unusual anatomy, which seems implies the bird sticks it inside some tight holes or uses it to do precise work like a hummingbird. If that is bird of prey, it will have a hooked nose, which is used to tear apart poor victims.
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