The bird is the word
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Printed Date: 10 September 2025 at 12:47am
Topic: The bird is the word
Posted By: plaza
Subject: The bird is the word
Date Posted: 08 April 2019 at 10:48am
Here's my bird animation so far. I might add some colour to make it really stand out. The animation seems okay, but I think there's a few lines that need correcting.
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Posted By: coolsarahkry
Date Posted: 09 April 2019 at 2:54am
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Wow, those wings look really good.
Maybe make the body move up and down slightly with the flap of the wings, right now it is a little stiff. |
Posted By: plaza
Date Posted: 11 April 2019 at 5:24am
Great ideas - here's a small edit.
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Posted By: plaza
Date Posted: 15 April 2019 at 4:47am
And another slight adjustment
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Posted By: NancyGold
Date Posted: 16 April 2019 at 4:16am
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Good wings animation, but the chest appears to be shifted to the left. Legs are hanging like the bird prepares to land or they are just broken. Tail could use some work too as doesn't correspond to your chosen angle of view, and looks a bit puny. The beak has some unusual anatomy, which seems implies the bird sticks it inside some tight holes or uses it to do precise work like a hummingbird. If that is bird of prey, it will have a hooked nose, which is used to tear apart poor victims. |