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Quote pavanz Replybullet Topic: Jaguar Spirit
    Posted: 03 October 2019 at 5:49pm
Hey guys! It's been long since the last time I showed up.

I'm trying to emulate the good ol' SNES JRPGs boss vibes for this sprite. I'm using only a monocromatic ramp right now, but I plan to add more color later.

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Quote Greycloak Replybullet Posted: 04 October 2019 at 11:20am
Seems to be turning out quite well. The only thing I might suggest is putting a defined dark border around objects such as the necklace and maybe the claws as well.

E.g.

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Quote pavanz Replybullet Posted: 23 October 2019 at 5:17pm
Thanks for the input! You're right. I still need to test the sprite on some noisy backgrounds, but a dark outline will be essential for readability.

Here's some progress

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Quote pavanz Replybullet Posted: 24 October 2019 at 2:27pm
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Quote Greycloak Replybullet Posted: 25 October 2019 at 9:34am
Looking really good. One thing I might point out is that the pattern on his foreground leg looks a bit odd, almost as if he has scales instead of fur.

Also, your current spot patterns make it look more like a cheetah than a jaguar. The dots on a jaguar's head are small and clumped together, and on their torso the dots expand into a circle of dots (sometimes with dots inside the circle), and then the circle of dots on the hind-legs and tail become larger with no middle dot.

Though of course a picture of a jaguar is much better than trying to explain their pattern.

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Quote pavanz Replybullet Posted: 25 October 2019 at 8:29pm
Thanks! The pattern in the legs is different on pourpose: I'm trying to replicate an indigenous graphism on it (I'm not satisfied with the result yet, still working on it).

The issue on the spots is spot on (ha!), I will try to work on the pattern some more.
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Quote pavanz Replybullet Posted: 27 October 2019 at 9:08am
Updated the spots and inverted the "tattoo", so it becomes more readable

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Quote Greycloak Replybullet Posted: 27 October 2019 at 3:01pm
Very nice. I can't think of anything else to critique on it.
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