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Clayton
Seaman ![]() Joined: 27 August 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Posted: 27 November 2021 at 5:45pm |
Hello! This is my first post on the WIP forum, so please bear with me. I've spent a decent bit of time working on this image and I think it's about as good as I'm able to get it on my own.
![]() 256x256 using the sobeachy8 palette by Snowy Owl on Lospec -- https://lospec.com/palette-list/sobeachy8 I'm concerned it feels a bit too boring right now. The squid's front side feels very flat to me. I'd also like to incorporate more motion into the piece if I can, but I'm not sure how to do that without compromising the silhouettes. Finally, the shadows feel wrong to me, but I can't really place why. I've done my best to make them possible within my (admittedly very limited) knowledge of light in stuff like this. I would appreciate any and all criticism. Thanks in advance! |
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Maye
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 27 November 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 71 |
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Just notice the mouth of squid is more like a peak.
Example: https://ocean.si.edu/sites/default/files/styles/photo_full/public/D1000090-scaled_1.jpg?itok=_Dx5V-yQ Also can add a small duck toy in beetween characters. Another idea is add a wall on the background, squares tiles or somethings like bathroom wall. |
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