[Feedback] Squid in Bathtub
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
Printed Date: 10 August 2022 at 4:15am
Topic: [Feedback] Squid in Bathtub
Posted By: Clayton
Subject: [Feedback] Squid in Bathtub
Date Posted: 27 November 2021 at 5:45pm
Hello! This is my first post on the WIP forum, so please bear with me. I've spent a decent bit of time working on this image and I think it's about as good as I'm able to get it on my own.
256x256 using the sobeachy8 palette by Snowy Owl on Lospec -- https://lospec.com/palette-list/sobeachy8
I'm concerned it feels a bit too boring right now. The squid's front side feels very flat to me. I'd also like to incorporate more motion into the piece if I can, but I'm not sure how to do that without compromising the silhouettes. Finally, the shadows feel wrong to me, but I can't really place why. I've done my best to make them possible within my (admittedly very limited) knowledge of light in stuff like this.
I would appreciate any and all criticism. Thanks in advance!
Posted By: Maye
Date Posted: 28 November 2021 at 7:15am
Just notice the mouth of squid is more like a peak.
Also can add a small duck toy in beetween characters. Another idea is add a wall on the background, squares tiles or somethings like bathroom wall.