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   hi all,
here's an early version of an image im currently working on. still very empty, but will add more stuff, as the image progress. when its done, it should be around 2000x2000. 
let me know what you think so far.

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Edited by Kennethfejer

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Kennethfejer Seaman Joined: 04 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 7	Topic: isotropolis Posted: 16 July 2005 at 9:14am
	hi all, here's an early version of an image im currently working on. still very empty, but will add more stuff, as the image progress. when its done, it should be around 2000x2000. let me know what you think so far. *updated Edited by Kennethfejer
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tuaarita Commander Joined: 04 December 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1049	Posted: 16 July 2005 at 9:48am
	cant find anything to complain about, you have your own style and it works great. you could make different kind of cars though. oh, and that lightpost is missing a part, right there where that guy stands in the middle of the street. Edited by Leroy
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pixelblink Commander Joined: 19 February 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2865	Posted: 16 July 2005 at 10:52am
	Looks pretty fantastic so far dude. I like the softness of your work. The statue thing is a nice addition. Some suggestions: lines on the road, more variety in cars (at least in colour), more variation in buildings, some slight details in the water, some benches on the grassy areas, more people. what's that purple thing at the bottom?
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sedgemonkey Admiral Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669	Posted: 16 July 2005 at 12:31pm
	I couldn't agree more with blink's "softness" remark... you are the master of the subtle/simple iso design. You've really done a kickass job with layout -- the sloping hills add so much. Couple crits... the hotel sign looks a little weird with all the whitespace on the right and the roof doors have the same space issue on the top. I'm sure it will all come together once you start building the details up. I can just imagine this all filled out. It's gonna be an amazing piece dude.
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pixelblink Commander Joined: 19 February 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2865	Posted: 16 July 2005 at 1:41pm
	I just noticed that the light source on the red building on the left is completely different than the rest as well some of the cars and the rooftop door on the top left brown building.
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Blueberry_pie Rear Admiral Joined: 24 July 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2176	Posted: 16 July 2005 at 1:48pm
	Awesome work man, gotta love the soft colours you picked Can't think of any crits aside from everything that's been said here already... I can't wait to see this finished
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Ensellitis Commander Joined: 19 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10099	Posted: 16 July 2005 at 5:15pm
	Ahh... I know I remembered your name from somewhere! You are the genius behind ISOCITY. Can't wait to see this finished, one thing I noticed in addition to the other crits is that the cars need thier light sources fixed...
	ಠ_ಠ There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross.
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Kennethfejer Seaman Joined: 04 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 7	Posted: 18 July 2005 at 1:22pm
	thanks all i've updated the image. dont worry the lighting will be fixed later on :) pixelblink its mr. squid ;)
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sedgemonkey Admiral Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669	Posted: 18 July 2005 at 1:34pm
	Those panda citizens and the squid are really great additions. Keep hitting us up with updates to this brilliant piece.
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ryan-gfx Commander Joined: 25 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 244	Posted: 18 July 2005 at 1:41pm
	Awesome. Kenneth you never cease to amaze me. Of course, it does needs TONS more details, like you stated, but other than that, it's really nice. I like the "clean" style you're portraying.
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PixelSnader Commander Not a troll! Joined: 05 June 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3194	Posted: 18 July 2005 at 2:06pm
	i think the bridge is weird. there are lines across it, like its divided up as a 2-part bridge, but it shows nothing to bring it up. allso, the wooden dock would most likely block the boats paths
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ryan-gfx Commander Joined: 25 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 244	Posted: 18 July 2005 at 3:52pm
	snader: The boat can go around the dock, it's not taking up that much space. And the hinges to the bridge are probably underneath.
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Garage Inc. Commander Joined: 20 October 2021 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 318	Posted: 18 July 2005 at 4:19pm
	Ryan, there's still nothing to draw the brige up. Snader has a point. Beisde that, everything else looks amazing. Great job so far.
	For every second spent wondering if you can do something, you could spend 2 seconds doing it.
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PixelSnader Commander Not a troll! Joined: 05 June 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3194	Posted: 18 July 2005 at 5:00pm
	*Originally posted by ryan-gfx* snader: The boat can go around the dock, it's not taking up that much space. And the hinges to the bridge are probably underneath. i dont mean the small vikingship. im talking about a big transport ship. they wouldnt have made such a wide canal if there were only small boats on it allso, i just noticed, the part of the canal to the far right of the pic is grey/empty.. you should make it blue aswell i think. right now its confusing (if its supposed to be grey) edit: the sizes are way off too, i just saw that.. a car is not supposed to be as big as a door =) Edited by snader
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ryan-gfx Commander Joined: 25 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 244	Posted: 18 July 2005 at 7:22pm
	Thats because he stole those cars from his isocity and temporarily put them there to fill space.
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Indigo Commander Joined: 20 April 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 174	Posted: 18 July 2005 at 7:25pm
	i dunno - those parking spaces seem fitted perfectly for those small cars. wow! Folks, we're looking at an entire city built by midgets! ... AND they make cute cars!
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Garage Inc. Commander Joined: 20 October 2021 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 318	Posted: 18 July 2005 at 7:38pm
	Not midgets...midget pandas and alians. Edited by Garage Inc.
	For every second spent wondering if you can do something, you could spend 2 seconds doing it.
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zi-double Commander Joined: 05 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 277	Posted: 18 July 2005 at 11:42pm
	I like your clear works and colours ... another what is perfect to me that is truck, cars, ship and UFO, but truck is my favourite :) Animation of the object is very inspirational :) Nice that you try to make dynamic terrain ... this add nice vision on the work :) Keep us with progress :) ========================== :) GDGB :)
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Ensellitis Commander Joined: 19 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10099	Posted: 18 July 2005 at 11:58pm
	As it is now, it makes a great desktop
	ಠ_ಠ There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross.
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jujucece Midshipman Joined: 06 July 2005 Location: France Online Status: Offline Posts: 60	Posted: 19 July 2005 at 12:25am
	Very nice work... Like Ensellitis, it makes a nice wallpaper ! It lacks some details and some variety... But impressive !
	Jujucece
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Kennethfejer Seaman Joined: 04 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 7	Posted: 19 July 2005 at 9:06am
	thanks all :) still working on it, hopefully there will be another update soon. snader: the thing that could bring the bridge up could be underneath it, you dont need to have cables and stuff to do that, if thats what you're thinking. heh wasn't planing on adding a huge transport ship, but maybe i should..... i dont know,.. even if the dock is in the way i dont think it matters, it dosent have to all make sence ;) the grey bit will be changed, still working on it. yep, the cars are stolen from isocity, just to make it look more crowded, they will be changed later.
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