isotropolis
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
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Printed Date: 09 September 2025 at 3:46am
Topic: isotropolis
Posted By: Kennethfejer
Subject: isotropolis
Date Posted: 16 July 2005 at 9:14am
hi all, here's an early version of an image im currently working on. still very empty, but will add more stuff, as the image progress. when its done, it should be around 2000x2000. let me know what you think so far.
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Posted By: tuaarita
Date Posted: 16 July 2005 at 9:48am
cant find anything to complain about, you have your own style and it works great. 
you could make different kind of cars though.
oh, and that lightpost is missing a part, right there where that guy stands in the middle of the street.
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Posted By: pixelblink
Date Posted: 16 July 2005 at 10:52am
Looks pretty fantastic so far dude. I like the softness of your work. The statue thing is a nice addition.
Some suggestions: lines on the road, more variety in cars (at least in colour), more variation in buildings, some slight details in the water, some benches on the grassy areas, more people.
what's that purple thing at the bottom?
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Posted By: sedgemonkey
Date Posted: 16 July 2005 at 12:31pm
I couldn't agree more with blink's "softness" remark... you are the master of the subtle/simple iso design. You've really done a kickass job with layout -- the sloping hills add so much.
Couple crits... the hotel sign looks a little weird with all the whitespace on the right and the roof doors have the same space issue on the top. I'm sure it will all come together once you start building the details up.
I can just imagine this all filled out. It's gonna be an amazing piece dude.
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Posted By: pixelblink
Date Posted: 16 July 2005 at 1:41pm
I just noticed that the light source on the red building on the left is completely different than the rest as well some of the cars and the rooftop door on the top left brown building.
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Posted By: Blueberry_pie
Date Posted: 16 July 2005 at 1:48pm
Awesome work man, gotta love the soft colours you picked 
Can't think of any crits aside from everything that's been said here already...
I can't wait to see this finished 
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Posted By: Ensellitis
Date Posted: 16 July 2005 at 5:15pm
Ahh... I know I remembered your name from somewhere! You are the genius behind ISOCITY. 
Can't wait to see this finished, one thing I noticed in addition to the
other crits is that the cars need thier light sources fixed...
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There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross.
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Posted By: Kennethfejer
Date Posted: 18 July 2005 at 1:22pm
thanks all i've updated the image.
dont worry the lighting will be fixed later on :)
pixelblink its mr. squid ;)
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Posted By: sedgemonkey
Date Posted: 18 July 2005 at 1:34pm
Those panda citizens and the squid are really great additions. Keep hitting us up with updates to this brilliant piece.
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Posted By: ryan-gfx
Date Posted: 18 July 2005 at 1:41pm
Awesome. Kenneth you never cease to amaze me. Of course, it does needs
TONS more details, like you stated, but other than that, it's really
nice. I like the "clean" style you're portraying.
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Posted By: PixelSnader
Date Posted: 18 July 2005 at 2:06pm
i think the bridge is weird. there are lines across it, like its divided up as a 2-part bridge, but it shows nothing to bring it up. allso, the wooden dock would most likely block the boats paths
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Posted By: ryan-gfx
Date Posted: 18 July 2005 at 3:52pm
snader: The boat can go around the dock, it's not
taking up that much space. And the hinges to the bridge are probably
underneath.
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Posted By: Garage Inc.
Date Posted: 18 July 2005 at 4:19pm
Ryan, there's still nothing to draw the brige up. Snader has a point. Beisde that, everything else looks amazing. Great job so far.
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Posted By: PixelSnader
Date Posted: 18 July 2005 at 5:00pm
Originally posted by ryan-gfx
snader: The boat can go around the dock, it's not taking up that much space. And the hinges to the bridge are probably underneath. i dont mean the small vikingship. im talking about a big transport ship. they wouldnt have made such a wide canal if there were only small boats on it
allso, i just noticed, the part of the canal to the far right of the pic is grey/empty.. you should make it blue aswell i think. right now its confusing (if its supposed to be grey)
edit: the sizes are way off too, i just saw that.. a car is not supposed to be as big as a door =)
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Posted By: ryan-gfx
Date Posted: 18 July 2005 at 7:22pm
Thats because he stole those cars from his isocity and temporarily put them there to fill space.
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Posted By: Indigo
Date Posted: 18 July 2005 at 7:25pm
i dunno - those parking spaces seem fitted perfectly for those small cars. wow! Folks, we're looking at an entire city built by midgets! ... AND they make cute cars!
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Posted By: Garage Inc.
Date Posted: 18 July 2005 at 7:38pm
Not midgets...midget pandas and alians.
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Posted By: zi-double
Date Posted: 18 July 2005 at 11:42pm
I like your clear works and colours ... another what is perfect to me that is truck, cars, ship and UFO, but truck is my favourite :) Animation of the object is very inspirational :)
Nice that you try to make dynamic terrain ... this add nice vision on the work :)
Keep us with progress :)
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:) GDGB :)
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Posted By: Ensellitis
Date Posted: 18 July 2005 at 11:58pm
As it is now, it makes a great desktop
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There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross.
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Posted By: jujucece
Date Posted: 19 July 2005 at 12:25am
Very nice work... Like Ensellitis, it makes a nice wallpaper !
It lacks some details and some variety...
But impressive !
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Posted By: Kennethfejer
Date Posted: 19 July 2005 at 9:06am
thanks all :)
still working on it, hopefully there will be another update soon.
snader: the thing that could bring the bridge up could be underneath it, you dont need to have cables and stuff to do that, if thats what you're thinking.
heh wasn't planing on adding a huge transport ship, but maybe i should..... i dont know,.. even if the dock is in the way i dont think it matters, it dosent have to all make sence ;)
the grey bit will be changed, still working on it. yep, the cars are stolen from isocity, just to make it look more crowded, they will be changed later.
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