Pixel Joint Forum: Mockup (WIP)

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Sabata
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Topic: Mockup (WIP)
Posted: 17 February 2008 at 11:44am

Early stages of a mockup… c & c

And any help on that tree?

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Inventrix
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Posted: 17 February 2008 at 11:53am

Make some leaves coming in front of the branches/trunk, also. At the moment it looks like it's leaning heavily away from the viewer, and I suspect that isn't what you intended.

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Sabata
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Posted: 18 February 2008 at 9:55am

=/ yea.....

How's the overall shading idea? first time doing a tree......

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littlesapphire
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Posted: 18 February 2008 at 11:25am

Overall shading looks pretty good. You should put some texture on the trunk for bark, but otherwise looks like it's coming along ok. I agree with Kira, though. The tree looks like it's really leaning way out there. I can' decide if it's the right-most root that's sticking way out, or if it's because the tree trunk is tilted so much. But the edit really helped it feel less tilted.

I really like the grass texture, but there's something about the colors that don't sit right with me. I'm thinking it's way too blue. I've yellowed it a bit for you to look at :3

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Sabata
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Posted: 20 February 2008 at 2:51pm

Thanks, I think I finally finished my tree, here is a pic whit my actual colors and one whit a 30 % yellow… looks like the yellow one looks better right?

original

yellow

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BlackDragon
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Posted: 20 February 2008 at 3:13pm

Yes, but typically one would use yellow in the highlights, and greens and blues in the shade. To create a simple hueshift.

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Sabata
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Posted: 01 March 2008 at 4:32pm

Been working on this after a short break (or maybe not so short =))

Last time grass was bothering me, it had a very messy look for me so I redid it from scratch here is the result…

any comments?

20 colors so far

PS: I am still to rework the UI

Edited by Sabata - 01 March 2008 at 4:33pm

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BlackDragon
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Posted: 01 March 2008 at 5:14pm

Hm, I liked the old grass better.

And the new colors are better.

Edited by BlackDragon - 01 March 2008 at 5:17pm

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Acherhar
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Posted: 01 March 2008 at 5:17pm

I like the new colors a lot, much better than the yellowed, overused kind. As for the grass, I like the new version too, except it looks more like small plants than grass.

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Posted: 02 March 2008 at 6:22am

Very nice updates. Your palette control/color conservation skills have really improved :)

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Sabata Commander Joined: 08 July 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 128	Topic: Mockup (WIP) Posted: 17 February 2008 at 11:44am
	Early stages of a mockup… c & c And any help on that tree?
	We fall to rise again.
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Inventrix Midshipman Joined: 01 January 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 77	Posted: 17 February 2008 at 11:53am
	Make some leaves coming in front of the branches/trunk, also. At the moment it looks like it's leaning heavily away from the viewer, and I suspect that isn't what you intended.
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Sabata Commander Joined: 08 July 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 128	Posted: 18 February 2008 at 9:55am
	=/ yea..... How's the overall shading idea? first time doing a tree......
	We fall to rise again.
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littlesapphire Midshipman Joined: 14 January 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 83	Posted: 18 February 2008 at 11:25am
	Overall shading looks pretty good. You should put some texture on the trunk for bark, but otherwise looks like it's coming along ok. I agree with Kira, though. The tree looks like it's really leaning way out there. I can' decide if it's the right-most root that's sticking way out, or if it's because the tree trunk is tilted so much. But the edit really helped it feel less tilted. I really like the grass texture, but there's something about the colors that don't sit right with me. I'm thinking it's way too blue. I've yellowed it a bit for you to look at :3
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Sabata Commander Joined: 08 July 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 128	Posted: 20 February 2008 at 2:51pm
	Thanks, I think I finally finished my tree, here is a pic whit my actual colors and one whit a 30 % yellow… looks like the yellow one looks better right? original yellow
	We fall to rise again.
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BlackDragon Commander Joined: 13 May 2014 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 729	Posted: 20 February 2008 at 3:13pm
	Yes, but typically one would use yellow in the highlights, and greens and blues in the shade. To create a simple hueshift.
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Sabata Commander Joined: 08 July 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 128	Posted: 01 March 2008 at 4:32pm
	Been working on this after a short break (or maybe not so short =)) Last time grass was bothering me, it had a very messy look for me so I redid it from scratch here is the result… any comments? 20 colors so far PS: I am still to rework the UI Edited by Sabata - 01 March 2008 at 4:33pm
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BlackDragon Commander Joined: 13 May 2014 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 729	Posted: 01 March 2008 at 5:14pm
	Hm, I liked the old grass better. And the new colors are better. Edited by BlackDragon - 01 March 2008 at 5:17pm
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Acherhar Commander Joined: 13 September 2021 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 179	Posted: 01 March 2008 at 5:17pm
	I like the new colors a lot, much better than the yellowed, overused kind. As for the grass, I like the new version too, except it looks more like small plants than grass.
	Jal: ...stfu, pixel and use the forum
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 02 March 2008 at 6:22am
	Very nice updates. Your palette control/color conservation skills have really improved :)
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