Pixel Joint Forum: Tiny House

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Zeebo
Seaman
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Joined: 01 August 2008
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Topic: Tiny House - First Pixel Art
Posted: 01 August 2008 at 11:42am

Hello. This is my first art of a little house.
Made a lot of building but none of them were worth to upload.

So I thought lets try this out.
Its simple I know but I am a beginner in pixel arts.

Rate and Comment please.

~ Zeeb0 - Pixel Art ~

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DrunkBurger
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Joined: 23 July 2008
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Posted: 01 August 2008 at 12:14pm

You need to tone down the colors. There too bright.

It needs more shadow too. The tree looks weird too

Dont go yell at me now because i dont really like it. I am a beginner too.
The avatar im using is my first work EVER.

It really needs more work.

But i think you can accomplish great things if you work more

Edited by DrunkBurger - 01 August 2008 at 12:21pm

~Mo Money Mo Bitches~

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Zeebo
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Posted: 02 August 2008 at 4:30am

Thanks for you comment, and yeah I don't know realy good on how to make a goodlooking tree, its the basics and I am trying to make shine in windows better, cant realy get a good thing shadows for the house and combine them with the window shine. I need to learn much more..

~ Zeeb0 - Pixel Art ~

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Ameki
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Posted: 02 August 2008 at 4:34am

The doorknob looks like it's a little low, maybe take it up one or two pixels.

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Blu
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Posted: 02 August 2008 at 11:22am

It looks like you used the spray paint can in Paint for the smoke (though I'm not sure). I don't ... think that's allowed, and it looks a bit fake, anyway. :/
Is the roof supposed to look peeked or flat?
Lower your color count, k?
The sidewalk kind of looks like it's sinking. ^^; You don't really need to shade it, either.
Try to make the tree's leaves more than just a circle.
Get rid of the black outline underneath the trunk of the tree.

Sorry if I sound cruel. That's not what I'm going for.

Good luck!

Gremlins rule the world; you just don't know it yet.

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pipe
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Posted: 17 August 2008 at 7:13am

why is left side of that grass yard brighter than right also i would get rid of those black outlines

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chanfan
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Posted: 17 August 2008 at 6:18pm

Hehe this reminds me of when I was new to pixelart. I think my first work looked something like this! Keep going! Look at lots of references to get ideas of how to improve! When doing isometric art I think eboy.com is a great place for inspiration!

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bren0098
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Posted: 20 August 2008 at 8:18am

Maybe try raising the roof a little. The tree trunk looks too big for the leafy part, so maybe make that a little bigger or the trunk a little smaller. Also, why is the grass brighter on one side than the other?

I'm not an expert or anything btw, just throwing in my $0.02. :D

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Zeebo Seaman Joined: 01 August 2008 Location: Netherlands Online Status: Offline Posts: 4	Topic: Tiny House - First Pixel Art Posted: 01 August 2008 at 11:42am
	Hello. This is my first art of a little house. Made a lot of building but none of them were worth to upload. So I thought lets try this out. Its simple I know but I am a beginner in pixel arts. Rate and Comment please.
	~ Zeeb0 - Pixel Art ~
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DrunkBurger Midshipman Joined: 23 July 2008 Location: Netherlands Online Status: Offline Posts: 66	Posted: 01 August 2008 at 12:14pm
	You need to tone down the colors. There too bright. It needs more shadow too. The tree looks weird too Dont go yell at me now because i dont really like it. I am a beginner too. The avatar im using is my first work EVER. It really needs more work. But i think you can accomplish great things if you work more Edited by DrunkBurger - 01 August 2008 at 12:21pm
	~Mo Money Mo Bitches~
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Zeebo Seaman Joined: 01 August 2008 Location: Netherlands Online Status: Offline Posts: 4	Posted: 02 August 2008 at 4:30am
	Thanks for you comment, and yeah I don't know realy good on how to make a goodlooking tree, its the basics and I am trying to make shine in windows better, cant realy get a good thing shadows for the house and combine them with the window shine. I need to learn much more..
	~ Zeeb0 - Pixel Art ~
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Ameki Seaman Joined: 23 July 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 27	Posted: 02 August 2008 at 4:34am
	The doorknob looks like it's a little low, maybe take it up one or two pixels.
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Blu Commander Joined: 23 January 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 208	Posted: 02 August 2008 at 11:22am
	It looks like you used the spray paint can in Paint for the smoke (though I'm not sure). I don't ... think that's allowed, and it looks a bit fake, anyway. :/ Is the roof supposed to look peeked or flat? Lower your color count, k? The sidewalk kind of looks like it's sinking. ^^; You don't really need to shade it, either. Try to make the tree's leaves more than just a circle. Get rid of the black outline underneath the trunk of the tree. Sorry if I sound cruel. That's not what I'm going for. Good luck!
	Gremlins rule the world; you just don't know it yet.
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pipe Commander Joined: 11 August 2008 Location: Croatia Online Status: Offline Posts: 110	Posted: 17 August 2008 at 7:13am
	why is left side of that grass yard brighter than right also i would get rid of those black outlines
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chanfan Seaman Joined: 07 April 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 22	Posted: 17 August 2008 at 6:18pm
	Hehe this reminds me of when I was new to pixelart. I think my first work looked something like this! Keep going! Look at lots of references to get ideas of how to improve! When doing isometric art I think eboy.com is a great place for inspiration!
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bren0098 Seaman Joined: 04 February 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 24	Posted: 20 August 2008 at 8:18am
	Maybe try raising the roof a little. The tree trunk looks too big for the leafy part, so maybe make that a little bigger or the trunk a little smaller. Also, why is the grass brighter on one side than the other? I'm not an expert or anything btw, just throwing in my $0.02. :D
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