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Quote skeddles Replybullet Topic: looking for someone to quickly crit my 4-frame ...
    Posted: 19 October 2008 at 4:38pm
walk cycle

quick, any tips/advice/comments/suggestions/edits/halps?

ps( the passing frames will move the entire body up later)


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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 19 October 2008 at 4:42pm
I think the arm's a bit weird. When people walk they don't bend their elbows like that. It does look pretty good for a starter frame but there's something weird about the foot on (our) left. It doesn't seem to be facing in the right direction.
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Quote skeddles Replybullet Posted: 19 October 2008 at 5:00pm
I attempted to fix that
and i made it go up and down
how's it lookin' now
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Quote leel Replybullet Posted: 19 October 2008 at 8:49pm
it looks more like he's climbing stairs than walking, since you don't actually have a    \  position for either of the legs.   
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