looking for someone to quickly crit my 4-frame ...
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Topic: looking for someone to quickly crit my 4-frame ...
Posted By: skeddles
Subject: looking for someone to quickly crit my 4-frame ...
Date Posted: 19 October 2008 at 4:38pm
walk cycle quick, any tips/advice/comments/suggestions/edits/halps?ps( the passing frames will move the entire body up later) ------------- |
Replies:
Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 19 October 2008 at 4:42pm
| I think the arm's a bit weird. When people walk they don't bend their elbows like that. It does look pretty good for a starter frame but there's something weird about the foot on (our) left. It doesn't seem to be facing in the right direction. |
Posted By: skeddles
Date Posted: 19 October 2008 at 5:00pm
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I attempted to fix that and i made it go up and down how's it lookin' now  > > ------------- |
Posted By: leel
Date Posted: 19 October 2008 at 8:49pm
| it looks more like he's climbing stairs than walking, since you don't actually have a \ position for either of the legs. |