that link is f*cked.
for people that dont wanna spend time copying and pasting this is his
image:


Edited by Shark

hmm shark why is the pic you posted black and white?   the real one is in color...

yes, I agree about the doors.  Great job on the crack by the chair - looks cool.  What else are you planning to add? because that's quite plain

leel, the original link was to a black and white version, but the link
didnt work so i posted the image to save people time copying and
pasting, since then he has edited his post, to a colour version.

monkey o d, i think the window needs work when do u see a big-
assed frame inside the room?, i think there needs to be more
details, ie tv, bookshelf (look around your own room for inspiration),
i think u shood also remove the door nearest to us.

its going good

Next update here. I largened(is that a word?)  the desk, moved the hole in the plaster, and added a bookshelf, as well as fixed the window more.

Sure, right away!

eDiT:

I added the books & a picture, but I can't seem to draw a good circle on the wall for the light, and the plant seemed like it wouldn't fit in the picture very well.

Any more crits?

Edited by Monkey 'o Doom

Here's the next update, I'm not sure what to to pick for the recycle bin, though. If anyone has any more crits, I'd love to hear them.

The floor is tiles, I fixed it now. Any more C&C?

Fixed up the clouds, moved the picture.

OK, i might be a bit late, but howabout some paper strewn out of the toppled bin? Hmm, i'm not keen on the computer chair... Also, along with the walls being changed you should edit the doors, the outlines at the moment are far too bold for your piece.

Edited by Larwick

Updated! I might submit this version.