Pixlejoint piece
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: The Joint
Forum Discription: Post your WIPs, ideas and anything else to do with the massive isometric apartment project.
URL: https://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=903
Printed Date: 10 September 2025 at 8:53am
Topic: Pixlejoint piece
Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Subject: Pixlejoint piece
Date Posted: 28 September 2005 at 3:24pm
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Edit: fixed. |
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Posted By: Shark
Date Posted: 29 September 2005 at 2:53am
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that link is f*cked.
for people that dont wanna spend time copying and pasting this is his image: 
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Posted By: sedgemonkey
Date Posted: 30 September 2005 at 8:45am
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It's a fine start... just not much going on in this scene. I would ditch the doors on the open sides. |
Posted By: leel
Date Posted: 30 September 2005 at 2:02pm
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hmm shark why is the pic you posted black and white? the real one is in color... yes, I agree about the doors. Great job on the crack by the chair - looks cool |
. What else are you planning to add? because that's quite plainPosted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 30 September 2005 at 3:35pm
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'cause irfanview killed it when I converted to PNG the first time. Thanx for the crits, all.
Edit: Added desk, room #, took out door.
Anyone have ideas for the closet door(top-left)? |
Posted By: Shark
Date Posted: 01 October 2005 at 4:22am
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leel, the original link was to a black and white version, but the link
didnt work so i posted the image to save people time copying and pasting, since then he has edited his post, to a colour version. monkey o d, i think the window needs work when do u see a big- assed frame inside the room?, i think there needs to be more details, ie tv, bookshelf (look around your own room for inspiration), i think u shood also remove the door nearest to us. |
Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 01 October 2005 at 5:12pm
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I put the desk in w/ chair, but I think the door'll have to stay. I spent 45 mins taking out the other one. |
Also fixed the window a bit. I'll look into the rest of the crits, too.Posted By: kr_defaultspost
Date Posted: 01 October 2005 at 11:21pm
| its going good |
Posted By: inkspot
Date Posted: 02 October 2005 at 9:17am
| never seen the chair larger that the desk. Your work is too unproportional, that makes it suck. |
Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 02 October 2005 at 12:27pm
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Next update here. I largened(is that a word?) the desk, moved the hole in the plaster, and added a bookshelf, as well as fixed the window more. |
Posted By: Shark
Date Posted: 02 October 2005 at 2:13pm
| better! now how about some books, plant life, a wall light? |
Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 02 October 2005 at 3:15pm
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Sure, right away! eDiT:
I added the books & a picture, but I can't seem to draw a good circle on the wall for the light, and the plant seemed like it wouldn't fit in the picture very well. Any more crits? ------------- http://pixelmonkey.ensellitis.com"> 
RPG is numberwang. |
Posted By: Shark
Date Posted: 04 October 2005 at 2:39pm
a bin by the desk, hang a light on left of bookcase. i dont like the picture, i duno this pic still seems a little empty 
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Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 05 October 2005 at 4:42pm
 Here's the next update, I'm not sure what to to pick for the recycle bin, though. If anyone has any more crits, I'd love to hear them. ------------- http://pixelmonkey.ensellitis.com">
RPG is numberwang. |
Posted By: pixelblink
Date Posted: 05 October 2005 at 4:58pm
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How about some new wallpaper? or paint? Also, that floor doesn't jive for me. It's hard to make out what it's supposed to be made of.... tiles? metal? carpet? ------------- |
Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 08 January 2006 at 5:09pm
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The floor is tiles, I fixed it now. Any more C&C? ------------- http://pixelmonkey.ensellitis.com">
RPG is numberwang. |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 08 January 2006 at 10:47pm
| You might want to highlight the surreal "cloud space" outside the door and window by making the window size larger and move the picture beside the shelves, leave the sign over the door. Then re-do those fugly clouds. Looks like all the c+c's made you stray from the concept you were going for at first. |
Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 29 January 2006 at 6:15am
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Fixed up the clouds, moved the picture. ------------- http://pixelmonkey.ensellitis.com">
RPG is numberwang. |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 29 January 2006 at 9:43pm
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Add some color to the walls any color other than that one and you're done. The wall color now is from the template.
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Posted By: Larwick
Date Posted: 09 February 2006 at 12:11pm
OK, i might be a bit late, but howabout some paper strewn out of the toppled bin? Hmm, i'm not keen on the computer chair... Also, along with the walls being changed you should edit the doors, the outlines at the moment are far too bold for your piece. 
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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 09 February 2006 at 9:24pm
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How about a highlight line on the bookcase like the desk has?
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Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 04 March 2006 at 3:52pm
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Updated! I might submit this version. ------------- http://pixelmonkey.ensellitis.com">
RPG is numberwang. |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 04 March 2006 at 10:56pm
submit, submit
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