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[WIP] RXD-AOFF

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Topic: [WIP] RXD-AOFF
Posted By: Demarcel
Subject: [WIP] RXD-AOFF
Date Posted: 04 February 2006 at 10:00am


This is some kind of robot,
A little bit inspired by the old school classic Turrican and a little bit by Metroid
In the left hand he's equipped with a rocket launcher, in his right he got a gatling gun

Its not finished of course, please add some c&c

The image uses a total of 15 colors so far

Oh i already know that the rocket launcher looks like crap hehe



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Posted By: Blick
Date Posted: 04 February 2006 at 12:50pm
You've got way too much happening in your palette. Bring down the colors a bit. It's hard to even see the shading because you're packing those colors along the edge of the highlights. Not every shade has to be in a one pixel thick line to give it depth. It could be brought down to 8 colors or less, I think. By merging the greens and yellow to two colors, having three reds one for highlight, a midtone and shadow and three grays (including the black). It'd also give it more contrast, I'm sure.

The hues seem to be the default hues from Paint and they rarely look good on anything. I think you should choose your own hues and use less saturation as well.


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Posted By: Demarcel
Date Posted: 04 February 2006 at 4:28pm
What about it now?

It uses 7 colors now




Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 04 February 2006 at 6:31pm
Dude thats a whole new art piece. I like both.

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Posted By: Blick
Date Posted: 05 February 2006 at 1:55am
Contrast is lacking.

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Posted By: Demarcel
Date Posted: 05 February 2006 at 6:40am
I realy think i have some calibration problem with my monitor
I checked out some monitor tests and all seem fine,
but for other ppl the images are too dark
Any suggestions? :)


Posted By: Demarcel
Date Posted: 05 February 2006 at 8:49am
I think i fixed the color issue with my monitor
I also used some software to darken the screen
Please tell me if this one isnt black anymore




Posted By: Blick
Date Posted: 05 February 2006 at 1:23pm
The green one was definitely the easiest to see out of the whole lot.

The new lighter gray one still lacks contrast. Contrast doesn't mean that it's too dark, it just means that there's not enough difference between the shades you're using, which can make it hard to understand what's going on as far as detail is concerned.


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Posted By: Demarcel
Date Posted: 05 February 2006 at 1:57pm
Originally posted by Blick

The green one was definitely the easiest to see out of the whole lot.

The new lighter gray one still lacks contrast. Contrast doesn't mean that it's too dark, it just means that there's not enough difference between the shades you're using, which can make it hard to understand what's going on as far as detail is concerned.



Ah, that was was wrong
I think this is the final version now then
I calibrated my monitor and put more difference between colors
All my work i made before is too dark

Anyways heres the newest :





Thanks for your critism Blick


Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 05 February 2006 at 2:08pm

8 colors, not bad. I noticed a few similar shades, but better overall. I like the highlight placement, although it seems to have a frowned-upon lightsource.



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Posted By: Demarcel
Date Posted: 05 February 2006 at 3:15pm
I made him a bit wider
Tomorrow ill work out the lighting a bit
I takes ages to complete eheh

old>   new>

Does anyone have a good name for it?



Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 05 February 2006 at 4:10pm
Much better. I like how you have changed the lightsource to the top. Looks ready for submission. :)

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Posted By: Demarcel
Date Posted: 06 February 2006 at 7:21am
Originally posted by Monkey 'o Doom

Much better. I like how you have changed the lightsource to the top. Looks ready for submission. :)


Thanks,
Time to submit then :)




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