Octo-Slave
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 22 February 2026 at 5:37pm
Topic: Octo-Slave
Posted By: Zizka
Subject: Octo-Slave
Date Posted: 11 April 2015 at 12:43pm
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Heya!
You know the drill!  Looking for feedback! Thanks!
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Replies:
Posted By: DrTripwire
Date Posted: 11 April 2015 at 3:45pm
| Is "otco" intentional? |
Posted By: RebeaLeion
Date Posted: 11 April 2015 at 9:34pm
| i find outlīne inside of sprite too much dark, try to using little different colour - you could possible that of sprite (darker purple, etc for front parts). |
Posted By: Zizka
Date Posted: 12 April 2015 at 3:02am
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DrTripwire:
I'll trade you the answer to your question for constructive criticism! :) Rebealeoin: I'm not sure I understand your comment unfortunately. Did you mean the blue ? |
Posted By: RebeaLeion
Date Posted: 12 April 2015 at 3:08am
yea, my english is bad. I meant something like this, but its my opinion.
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Posted By: DrTripwire
Date Posted: 12 April 2015 at 11:24am
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The title is "Octo-Slave" yet you wrote "Otco" in the piece. I see nothing wrong with asking if that was intentional or not.
I think the little frankenstein-esque metal neck bits have incorrect perspective. At that POV, I think we might see more of the flat end, as opposed to just the side. I also agree with RebeaLeion. edit: never mind about the little dude. |
Posted By: RebeaLeion
Date Posted: 12 April 2015 at 11:31am
| i think little guy is good and his hand is on the glass. |
Posted By: Zizka
Date Posted: 17 April 2015 at 7:19pm
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Yup, RebeaLeion!
Fixed the perspective mentioned by DrTripWire: 
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