[WIP] Umbrella Corp.
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Topic: [WIP] Umbrella Corp.
Posted By: CamLit
Subject: [WIP] Umbrella Corp.
Date Posted: 27 July 2007 at 8:35am
 It didn't make it to the gallery, so some C&C please?
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Posted By: Hatch
Date Posted: 27 July 2007 at 8:43am
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Harsh critique warning
The text looks really sloppy. At 1x it almost looks like a scrawl. You have a black background and a few grays; why not AA? Why not give your curvy letters some curves (capital C for a glaring example) like in http://fdata.over-blog.com/0/18/85/05/thumbs/petite-bulle-des-horreurs/umbrella-corp.jpg - what I'm assuming was your reference picture ? Also, why is the umbrella so messy? It looks like it's in tatters. The actual logo looks nothing like that. And again: why no AA? ------------- |