Super Smash Bros Mockup!- C&C
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Topic: Super Smash Bros Mockup!- C&C
Posted By: volcom
Subject: Super Smash Bros Mockup!- C&C
Date Posted: 07 January 2008 at 3:55pm
 
20 colors.
Thanks for crit and help Blackdragon, AtomicMushroom, Metaru, and Jal (for the wise talk...lol) ------------- <WHERE AN OBAMANATION> |
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Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 07 January 2008 at 6:31pm
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I really need to know how to shade in blocks, i've tried but every time it look bad. ------------- <WHERE AN OBAMANATION> |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 07 January 2008 at 6:34pm
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Do a search in the gallery for mockup, mock up, video game, tile and see what you find. Remember you are on the 'searching solutions by yourself' stage of pixelarting. ------------- |
Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 08 January 2008 at 5:32am
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like it? I added the lives and %'s. I took away stupid green thing. Thanks jal...i do need to learn on my own. Just comments then
-comments apreciated >..< ------------- <WHERE AN OBAMANATION> |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 08 January 2008 at 6:34am
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Nice to see you trying. Notice that everything in your mockup layout is created using boxes and boxy items. I would suggest making some pattern on the sky that is not boxy to add dynamics to the mockup. The green thing was not terrible just made of boxes too. Another thing to perhaps work on is to make Pikachu and Kirby stand out from the scene a bit more. Either thru contrast or oulining or some other solution you come up with. You might also keep your colors in check. You already have 20 of the 32 used up, might be trouble. The very darkest gray next to the black is a wasted color. 2 medium grays also might be eliminated. The 2 pinks that the arrow points two look the same, get rid of one. anyhoo, keep at it you're doing well. EDIT: Pie and I commented at the same time. ------------- |
Posted By: Blueberry_pie
Date Posted: 08 January 2008 at 6:34am
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Good improvement on the walls :) Play around with the contrast a bit. It's not 3D anymore so it would be harder for the player to see what's part of the background and what isn't. You can make this clearer by increasing the contrast on the parts where the characters can walk (the wooden platforms and the wall on the bottom). You should probably also increase the contrast on Kirby and Pikachu so they won't blend in with the background so much. ------------- |
Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 09 January 2008 at 5:03am
i can't really tell if i went overboard with contrast or it's just good. You tell me lol. Jal, thanks for thinking of sky patern idea...i will think of something at school today (maybe a gradient, or light symbol you can see ever 10-20 pixels or so). ------------- <WHERE AN OBAMANATION> |
Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 10 January 2008 at 4:44am
added some clouds, took floor down some blocks on left. This has like 19 colors now. I say this is almost done...but i have so many other colors which i will use today.
C&C please....ideas welcome ------------- <WHERE AN OBAMANATION> |
Posted By: Delfos
Date Posted: 10 January 2008 at 5:08am
| I think the last ones are too dark. Remember that the background it's secondary, and what really has to show are the characters. You shoul work on that. |
Posted By: Blueberry_pie
Date Posted: 10 January 2008 at 9:17am
What I meant by my post is that you should only increase the contrast on the parts of the stage the characters can stand on. Here's a quick and dirty Photoshop edit based on your second to last version: ------------- |
Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 10 January 2008 at 2:15pm
sorry, i guess i didn't fully understand.
EDIT:
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Posted By: surt
Date Posted: 10 January 2008 at 2:55pm
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If you are trying to present foreshortening with the clouds and the scene is not set in the sky then the clouds should probably vanish toward the horizon rather than the zenith.
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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 10 January 2008 at 4:50pm
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Originally posted by volcom I say this is almost done...but i have so many other colors which i will use today. No you can do more and you have time...patience ------------- |
Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 10 January 2008 at 5:28pm
Thanks Surt, i needed to fix that eventually. Jal....thanks?
Anyone have ideas on how i could use the rest of the colors i have to make it look awesome...i know i could fully shade the blocks but should i?
Surt, i have no clue what zenith is...hope my edit is what you ment. But i know what horizon is =D ------------- <WHERE AN OBAMANATION> |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 10 January 2008 at 5:37pm
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The blocks don't really need more for now, maybe later. Try making the menu items stand out more somehow. Kirby just doesn't stand out enough I think? For that sky you could try adding things there like you originally had? This is based on a real life 3D game so use whatever that game uses. ------------- |
Posted By: Delfos
Date Posted: 10 January 2008 at 5:46pm
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I think you should use the rest of the colours inthe characters. Make them bigger, make them better, make them crazier! (xD). Really, you should make the pikachu bigger... Tomorrow i can show you what i think you sould do... but im in another computer now :S. Good luck |
Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 10 January 2008 at 6:12pm
Ok, Pikachu is on a repawn platform which happens after they die...and they obviously blink. I changed % text, the other one looked horrible.
~Jal, i might add some floating platforms or something in bg
~delfos, i will definitly try to buff up the characters
EDIT:
 My color count is 30 now....i don't know if i can finish with 2 or use colors used for new stuff.
-C&C
ANOTHER EDIT:
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Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 11 January 2008 at 4:49am
Tried fixing kirby up as best i could. Like it? 29 colors now
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Posted By: Elwin
Date Posted: 11 January 2008 at 5:25am
| If you want to save color you could use the orange color from the platforms on kirbys feet ^^ |
Posted By: surt
Date Posted: 11 January 2008 at 5:39am
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You can easily cut down colours tremendously. Here's a 14 colour edit:  -------------
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Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 11 January 2008 at 12:16pm
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way too dark for such a sunny day i believe surt. but the color recycle is a valid point. volcom, perhaps limiting yourself to a maximun of colors per sprite(3-4 appears to be fine i believe) and the you can go easily with the rest od these in the BG. but do not abuse. its good that you can use up to 32 colors, but it doesn't mean that you must use all these 32 colors. it will be way more easy to solve the contrast problem of kirby if you just placed him in front of the ligth(sky) background. but, kirby's desing needs a revision. seriuosly, and no ofense, but he doesn't look a lot like him, expet because its pinkness. finally... try to be more 'accurate' to the real game.  ------------- I ate leel's babies |
Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 11 January 2008 at 4:34pm
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Surt, hell blocks?
Metaru, i know Kirby looks nothing like kirby except for skin..and i cant seem to find what he's missing.
EDIT:
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Posted By: Kren
Date Posted: 11 January 2008 at 5:11pm
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hmm IMO pikachu should be more readable he doesn't look like he just appeared >_> I prefer the first versions of pikachu, I would also search for some references to make it more smash bros. |
Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 11 January 2008 at 6:25pm
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yake these dark things of the background out. they doesn't make any sense. also, kirby is one of the easiest character to be drawn.  follow the instructions :P ------------- I ate leel's babies |
Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 11 January 2008 at 7:32pm
Thanks a ton for tut...i know its pretty lame to have to draw kirby over. I chose the skuint look for him going flying backward in air (from punch or kick). ------------- <WHERE AN OBAMANATION> |
Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 11 January 2008 at 11:57pm
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that does make a lot of diference now. kirby is really kirby. and that wasn't "exactly" a tutorial..... ------------- I ate leel's babies |
Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 7:26am
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Ok, now im gona figure out what i should use the last color i have then submit, thanks for help guys ------------- <WHERE AN OBAMANATION> |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 7:34am
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But you already submitted it. I will add it when you are completely done. So you know. A pixel that is an active WIP will not be added to the gallery until completed. ------------- |
Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 7:46am
i completed it.
 32 colors, unless you think its not.
Think i got a chance of getting atleast 1 vote? That would be great success for me ------------- <WHERE AN OBAMANATION> |
Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 7:48am
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why not working that pikachu a bit more, and give him a more dinamic pose?
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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 7:49am
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And the item above their heads like the screen shown above.
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Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 7:55am
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alright, I'm gona redo Pikachu. The stuff above there heads are just sometimes seen....but i guess anything added with look better. (I have the game....lol) ------------- <WHERE AN OBAMANATION> |
Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 8:17am
any better?
Forgot to outline Pikachu:
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Posted By: Blueberry_pie
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 8:27am
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What happened to some of the blocks in the bottom left corner, and the green tower top you had in one of the previous versions? Kirby looks a lot better now, but it looks like you forgot to improve his character portraits (the ones that show how many lives he has left). Also, the darker shade on Kirby isn't very noticable at 1x zoom. I think you should make that a tad darker. ------------- |
Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 8:35am
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i decided the green thing was making it look worse. Look at another ref...theres sorta another ground level on that map (trust me i have the game). I already have 32 colors lol.
Like this better:
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Posted By: BlackDragon
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 10:31am
| Fix Kirby's portrait, it looks horridly jagged. |
Posted By: AtomicMushroom
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 10:50am
| I would add sparks in the air, or whatever those things were in the real game, to show that pikachu hit kirby. Or even a shockwave, etc. It'll give the scene a little more excitment. |
Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 11:05am
any better? The sparks idea sorta hid the jagedy parts... ------------- <WHERE AN OBAMANATION> |
Posted By: E-Bomb
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 11:06am
You can easily knock down some of the colors. |
Posted By: BlackDragon
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 11:10am
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No, I mean the portrait that indicates his lives.
Also, the shadow cast by the platforms on the building should be flipped
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Posted By: AtomicMushroom
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 11:20am
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This is what I maent about sparks:
 A put the effect at the place of impact rather than directly on pikachu. |
Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 11:29am
any better? Blackdragon, what if the sparks on kirby were sorta a light source and sun and it mixed...or do you strongly think it should be turned? ------------- <WHERE AN OBAMANATION> |
Posted By: E-Bomb
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 11:38am
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At 1x zoom, it looks like Pikachu has only one shade of yellow and one brown. Up the contrast please. |
Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 11:47am
better? Im getting really bad w/ colors...every time i change something i forget to change other thing.
This has 32: (it should be like 40-50)
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Posted By: BlackDragon
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 11:59am
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Well you have too many lightsources.
Blocks are lit from top.
Barred window from top left.
Kirby from top left.
Pikachu isn't shaded.
And the platforms from the top-right.
If kirby were lit by the static he would be only one shade. So keep him. So, yes I think they should be changed. The sparks would flip it anyway so I don't know what you were saying there :P |
Posted By: AtomicMushroom
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 12:02pm
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Just a few things I see:
Pikachu's anatomy looks off to me. I would look at some ref pics just as you did with kirby.
Shade Pikachu using the same light source you did with kirby. (meaning shade his chest and face)
The cloud under kirby looks like a platform that he's standing on.
The shadows cast by the orange platforms are inaccurate. Reverse theirangle.
Make the impact effect more prominent/dramatic. (and maybe even add a second lightsource highlight on pikachu and kirby caused by the effects.)
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Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 12:25pm
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ok, i can do most of this...just remember i can't make anymore colors. All 32 are used...i best get to work now. Thanks a ton
This better?
 . Now there is one main lightsource...the sun directly above. I have 31 colors now because i took darker shade off kirby...cuz its obvious when sparks are on you than it wouldn't be dark but lighter. Those 'clouds' are rock platforms way back in the scene...just to have something there. To make sure i lowered it and switched its colors.
-i apreciate the C&C so much ------------- <WHERE AN OBAMANATION> |
Posted By: Delfos
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 12:43pm
| It's getting better and better! Maybe you could add some secondary stuff on the screen, like weapons and items , just to make it more real |
Posted By: E-Bomb
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 1:11pm
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Waitaminute.... In the game, there's a mountain in the background with some sky, not sky with some clouds! And where did those blue platforms come from? Also, if the sun is directly above, change the platforms' shadows! If you get rid of some of the colors, you can make the green castle parts and make this more like the actual game. |
Posted By: Kren
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 1:11pm
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Damn 31 colours in that o.O?! thats alot You can easily delete some grey tones and nearly similar colour and it will still look good. I am sure you can delete atleast 10 colours. |
Posted By: BlackDragon
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 1:29pm
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Originally posted by Kren
Damn 31 colours in that o.O?! thats alot You can easily delete some grey tones and nearly similar colour and it will still look good. I am sure you can delete atleast 10 colours. Surt already stated that AND did an edit:
Originally posted by surt You can easily cut down colours tremendously. Here's a 14 colour edit: Volcom. Concentrate on cutting down on your colors.
It will help you a lot.
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Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 1:38pm
Surt's edit looks like dark hell on a sunny day. Why would it help me? I like it how it is and i really don't need anymore colors. Unless you insist on something else.
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Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 1:43pm
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You need FEWER colors. You can use different colors than Surt, but nonetheless it is a technically good edit that shows how you can eliminate colors. You have 32; he has 14. Maybe you don't like his CHOICES, but the NUMBER is better. 32 colors for what you have is ridiculous. ------------- http://pixelmonkey.ensellitis.com"> 
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Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 2:03pm
25 colors. Is that still rediculous? Thanks, sorry for being an idiot ------------- <WHERE AN OBAMANATION> |
Posted By: Kren
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 2:11pm
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I managed to remove ten colourse without deleting how it looks. IMO the number of colours doesn't matter as long as they are used in a good way. But this is not the case, for example the darker 1P tone is a colour that you can delete with the darker pikachu yellow colour, and pikachu thunderbolt (the one in kirby) can be in only one colour because the difference between both colour is really small to actually see a difference. You can also delete the darkest cloud colour(the one down of kirby ), hmm you also have two light brick colour one grey and another one blue you can replace the lighter blue colour with the grey one and you will not see the difference. oh you need to make the two kirby face more readably by making the grey be darker( use the outline of those kirby for that) |
Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 2:34pm
19 colors....huge update. Since i went done lots i might make a light brown shade than that other color cuz its sorta odd.
Tiny edit:
 20 colors.
-i have a question...should i use the colors i have to use or keep it like this? ------------- <WHERE AN OBAMANATION> |
Posted By: E-Bomb
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 2:37pm
| You still need to completely redo the background. Remember, MOUNTAINS! |
Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 2:52pm
this any good?
Can i turn this in on Sunday or it has to be before Sunday? ------------- <WHERE AN OBAMANATION> |
Posted By: Delfos
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 3:23pm
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You have until Sunday At Midnight (i think) You're doing it fine. it's an amazing improvement. Just compare this last one with your first one. It's seems made by to different persons! I would give more contrast between the bright kirby colour an his shadow. i like the colours on your avatr more. And make some AA in the heart (use the kyrby's shadow, don't create another colour) |
Posted By: BlackDragon
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 3:24pm
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Before 12:00 Sunday, PJ time.
Check the clock at the homepage.
For the peice. Very nice update
 Use some of those greys you have in the mountains. Use the browns in the platform Pikachu is standing on. Pikachu could have some of that brown, and that would knock it back down to 19 colors. The heart container should be symmetrical and have a white outline:
http://super-smash-bros.wikia.com/wiki/Image:Heart_Container.jpg">
 Pikachus tail looks bent up and weird. Also you may want to show that pikachu cast that spark somehow.
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Posted By: Delfos
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 3:38pm
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Oh.. i thought the heart had a "jewel" effect... it's not a bad idea xD |
Posted By: AtomicMushroom
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 4:35pm
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Just a few things I see:
Pikachu's anatomy looks off to me. I would look at some ref pics just as you did with kirby.
Shade Pikachu using the same light source you did with kirby. (meaning shade his chest and face)
The cloud under kirby looks like a platform that he's standing on.
The shadows cast by the orange platforms are inaccurate. Reverse their angle.
Make the impact effect more prominent/dramatic. (and maybe even add a second lightsource highlight on pikachu and kirby caused by the effects.) Remember to do these too.
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Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 4:58pm
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dude the platforms are not inaccurate...the lightsource is above slightly to the right. Is anything shaded differently? I will do #2. ------------- <WHERE AN OBAMANATION> |
Posted By: BlackDragon
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 5:05pm
| From what I see they are. Right now everything is lit above but the shadow is being cast to the left... |
Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 5:10pm
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and the platforms are being cast to the left....
update:
 i wouldn't call it a lightsource cuz thats not how it is the game...but its not bad.
Ill post later...but i made blocks so lightsource is coming from top slight right. ------------- <WHERE AN OBAMANATION> |
Posted By: AtomicMushroom
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 5:47pm
| I said they were inaccurate because kirby was shaded as if the light source came from top-left, contradicting to the way the shadows were cast. |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 5:49pm
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Remember to be patient, k.
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Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 6:09pm
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im being patient....no more crits jal? Just wise stuff lol...jk. Mushroom, hes not shaded like that anymore.
 i think this is a good days work. Hopefully it will be really nice by 12:00 PM tomarrow. The days not over yet though, more crits if any
-any of you guys think i have a chance of 1 vote? that would be awesome...(not including me lol). Even though i have an entire days work ahead on this piece which could be huge or small. ------------- <WHERE AN OBAMANATION> |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 6:11pm
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I think others are helping better and more than I am for this project. I am keeping an eye on it tho ../pixelart/28510.htm"> 
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Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 6:16pm
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yep...your just sipping your beer as you watch me improve this step by step. I had no doubt you had been watching and been temped to post...
anyone wanna answer my question?
I wanted to sumbmit that:
 lol big diff no?------------- <WHERE AN OBAMANATION> |
Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 6:31pm
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remove the smile in kirby's icon.
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Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 6:40pm
made low area even lower. Added crate, tried shading with blue and looked nice, did same with platforms on tower ------------- <WHERE AN OBAMANATION> |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 6:55pm
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k, I got a crit for you, hehe. See the mountains. Notice the is jaggy? Use the darkest blue or the medium grey to AA that a little. Just to smooth it out a little bit. ps: some people vote based on skill, technique and progress so you should get some to vote. Don't worry about stuff like that tho. Your Mom likes you, I like you...what else do you need ;) ------------- |
Posted By: BlackDragon
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 7:03pm
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"Notice the is jaggy" lol
*Ahem* Moving on.
Actually the mountains should be lighter: as things recede they get lighter and bluer, no?
Remove the pink pixel that is on top of the kirby icon's head.
Change the darker yellow to an orange color.
Use a lighter blue to highlight the wooden platforms.
I liked the original text, I could see it and it looked nice.
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Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 7:28pm
i old text looked horrid to me lol...Maybe ill make the current one 2px instead of one.
Jal, didn't you mean light shade to AA?
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Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 12 January 2008 at 7:52pm
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I think the crate is shaded and colored a bit strangely for wood; I made an edit to show what palette choices I would use and to show one option of adding wood grain. Also, you can get rid of your yellow used on the 1P text and replace all instances of it with the yellow used on pikachu's shadows, and things should look better as well as use one color less.
The edit:
 You could probably use the highlight color of the crate on the platforms too if they're supposed to be brown. ------------- http://pixelmonkey.ensellitis.com">
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Posted By: E-Bomb
Date Posted: 13 January 2008 at 8:04am
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Do what the monkey said. The mountains look great, and so does the rest of the sky. The platforms look weird, because they're supposed to be orange. Pikachu's tail: FIX IT! Try to add the green parts to the stage. The bricks on the wall with the orange platforms should be the same as the ones at the bottom. Pikachu's head looks a bit odd, and Kirby's lives look weird. |
Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 13 January 2008 at 10:03am
I was an idiot not to fix arrow and text before. I had it the same, then changed pikachu's contrast and forgot to change. Thanks for edit, grain/yellow look is tons better.
E-Bomb, the the brick on the tower are not supposed to be the same cuz you don't stand on it...(so it has little contrast, differing from the platforms and the ground). I didnt say this... i think it was AtomicMushroom
What do you mean by adding green parts to stage? Fixed basically everything both u said except green thing and tower (which is not supposed to be fixed).
----I've tried thinking hard on how making Kirby's icon look better...pillowshade or anything. Any ideas or suggestions?
C&C! ------------- <WHERE AN OBAMANATION> |
Posted By: E-Bomb
Date Posted: 13 January 2008 at 10:10am
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*Smacks forehead* Sorry, I guess I'm being vague. I meant to change the color of the bricks on the bottom that are UNDER the ones you stand on. Sorry if I was unclear. As for green: See the greenness of the castle? |
Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 13 January 2008 at 10:30am
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dude, i know what you meant...your still standing on the ones under. The mountains are colored the same as tower... Its just a lighter cuz it shows its not directly part of the scene and you dont stand on it...just the platforms.
EDIT: made kirby icons look better
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Posted By: Reo
Date Posted: 13 January 2008 at 10:48am
Here's an edit i did(of the picture I found in the gallery):
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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 13 January 2008 at 10:52am
and mine too added: •Some tone to the platform with the yellows •New yellow for Pikachu •Item color •mountain •the fire of electricity of whatever that is. • ears on PIk and eyes on Kirby •1P in gray not yellow chop, chop ------------- |
Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 13 January 2008 at 10:52am
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nice, except if you ever watched pokemon or played this game i'm positive he dosn't let out blue sparks but yellow. Icon edit on Kirby is nice...i gotta add the cheacks on mine.
Your Pikachu is Smaller and more 'pikachu'. (but when i comes to size kirby and pikachu are basically the same in hight
Holy crud Jal, nice man. Tired of that beer? I love the impact, i will surly do something similar and with kirby to...(ofcourse as a ref.). The orange light on the blocks...i might only do something similar under the action, or i would put it on the tower blocks also. ------------- <WHERE AN OBAMANATION> |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 13 January 2008 at 10:56am
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Remember this is a 2D version of a 3D game not a clone. he sparks are not blue that is 'glow' :p Your version is a tiled mockup so the clouds should be copy/pasted not all unique. ------------- |
Posted By: Reo
Date Posted: 13 January 2008 at 11:02am
They are still about the same height And anyone that watched the anime/played the game knows that pikachu's ears are black and the tail is brown at the end  |
Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 13 January 2008 at 11:15am
we'll its similar...on the clouds, i made 2nd top row all identicle. for the top, i think since they are big maybe they should be a bit diff. Unless you insist it should really be identicle.
I only shaded blocks were action was...looks cool to me.
EDIT: 16 colors
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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 13 January 2008 at 11:17am
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very nice decision there
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Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 13 January 2008 at 11:26am
Your idea  . What now? Any more crit anyone.
Just thanks to:
Blackdragon
Jalonso
Metaru
AtomicMushroom
E-Bomb
Reo
Forgot Monkey O'doom
 but im still not done, 9 hours left ------------- <WHERE AN OBAMANATION> |
Posted By: E-Bomb
Date Posted: 13 January 2008 at 12:36pm
 That's what you should do with the bottom blocks. I think they look funky the way you had them. |
Posted By: Kren
Date Posted: 13 January 2008 at 1:41pm
| hmm I would make the 0% and the 210% bigger since right now It is really hard to understand it, same goes for the 1P and 2P. You should AA the heart and improve the white outline since it is jaggy |
Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 13 January 2008 at 4:23pm
better? 1P and 2P are supposed to be skinny. This is my last edit, thanks for help everyone ------------- <WHERE AN OBAMANATION> |