The legs are stepping farther forward than they are back. It makes it kind of look like she is kicking her feet out in front of her instead of running. I think everything else about it is good though.

So I really like it a lot but from a design perspective the head looks too pointy to me. I'm not saying make it completely round. But I think if you rounded off the corner just a little but it would lend to that cartoony feel.

After looking up some pictures of knights in similar outfits I see what you mean. I'll keep that in mind for the future. I haven't made much art of any kind involving fabric so I have much to learn there.

Thank you for the advice but the main reason I'm posting to a website is so I have some public accountability to create everyday. I'm doing to make something everyday and practice everyday. But I will keep that in mind when posting in the future after this month.