Thanks for the feedback. Maybe I should start using some life references so I can see how light and form really are. Do you think taking a traditonal approach would result in a more realistic piece (starting off with guidelines and shapes first like with drawing?)

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Whoa! That looks wayyyy better! Thank you! 

And yeah, I just realized what that a few days ago. Will keep it in mind next time.

This is stunning. You really have a way with capturing a mood and composition!!

Thanks! The palette consists of four colors (the bg for this piece is for presentational purposes). I just noticed I used a darker shade for the Submissive Loon's string. Will make a quick edit to fix that.

Well they come in different flavors (blue raspberry, sour apple, wild cherry and chocolate). They drop a candy like substance upon death which is used to make potions and elixirs. Too detailed? Lol