Revised Portrait..?

Revised Portrait..?

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Revised Portrait..?



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Title: Revised Portrait..?
Pixel Artist: Varock Shade  (Level 7 Underboss :: 7111 points)
Posted: 5/2/2007 01:10
Palette: 22 colors
Statistics:  11 comments    2 faves    0 avatars

This is a revision of my first pixel I posted here. Since I posted it here I wanted to revise it. As time past, I saw that I could really improve many things on it, and that's why I have worked for 2 or 3 months between all projects to finish the revised version.

From the first thread I started on the forum, there were many tips edits etc, including:
- This edit during the making of the first version by Snader.
- This edit during the making of the revision by Pixelblink.
I also got many help from Cryssy, Aleiav, Stitchy, Metaru, Monkey 'o Doom, and many other people.

And last but not least, the Photo Reference.

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j.negrón (Level 1 Thug) @ 12/9/2009 15:50

the hair looks great!!


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Zolaris (Level 6 Hitman) @ 9/15/2009 05:34

 wow thats a lot of work, great details !


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leel (Level 5 Killer Klown) @ 6/19/2007 08:29
Great improvement! Really, very nice :D 

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Varock Shade (Level 7 Underboss) @ 5/3/2007 01:13
what for example can i improve on...? cause i might just do that when i have some spare time...
And metaru, I decided to put the names of people in there who have posted some important comment for the project... without the forum I wouldn't have had grip on the progress...

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mikl3 (Level 7 Sheriff) @ 5/3/2007 01:05
nice hairs, bad skin

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Metaru (Level 8 Brigadier General) @ 5/2/2007 14:57

rather than remarking the obvius quality of this work, i want to give an special congratulation to varock for the extense and almost infinite time and patience you had to make this. more than just another submission, this is an example of how users can improve their works with the help of the WIP section.

kudos varock, kudos to you.

Note: My name is there!!!!!! WHOOOOooo xD


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philipptr (Level 4 Team Leader) @ 5/2/2007 13:16
It's so sad you did this based on a bad reference. Especially the flashlight hurts this piece. otherwise technically very nice.

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AchooMooMoo (Level 1 Rookie) @ 5/2/2007 10:28
I love the hair strands/highlights etc.. but with having trouble with contrast on her face, I would have just lowered the contrast on the hair to match the face, There also needs to be some shadow underneath the foremost lock of hair on her forehead, the one over her cheek.
Anyway I think this is well done.. good job :)

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Presley (Level 1 Seaman) @ 5/2/2007 06:24
I think that this would have been much better with more contrast. It reminds me of a poorly rendered 3D human. I understand the ref didn't have much, but that's simply poor photography. ;P I think studying Snaders edit would be a good start.

Never pixel braces please, unless you're doing a mouth at like 300x500 or something. D:

It's a great start, and has improved greatly, but with a little more tweaking it could be so much better.

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jalonso (Level 11 Godfather) @ 5/2/2007 04:25
You really did work very hard on this, kudos.

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