Looks like he needs more head.:P
Yeeeaaah, a bit sketchy, but still nice.
5/6

Shoulders would be more to the right and left.
Too bad it is rushed. It has a lot of potential.
Really like the hand and the flame.

Looks very WIPpy, but other than that, its pure awesome. I think you should spend the extra time finishing this, It'd definatly be worth it.

i don't think the facial features, especially eyes and mouth, should extend al the way to the edge of the face... and the nose should shrink proportionally...  the robe and hood look slightly rushed, as you said, but the hand and magic look very good.

The face seems a bit wide, and the hood seems to be sort of small, it should be taller.

But still nice vanmir.

Very nice vanmir, haven't seen you on here before but apparently you submitted a few pieces before! There's not much in the matter of color choices really - just one ramp - but i still like it :)