I think it looks good!

I love the style of this piece, and i dont think the clouds are all that bad. They fit the style very nicely.

@ Antiboton - I'm not really satisfied with the clouds myself, but they looked even worse in white, and I did not want to exceed the 8 colors I had choosen. I'm trying out some other colors myself right now.

@ MFlanaga - Yeah I was thinking the same. I think animating her would'nt be all that difficult. What worries me is having her move around on different backgrounds.

Too hot!

I know those are common retro colors but orange clouds and the big boulder seems too warm.

I really really really like the little female human sprite, i bet you could animate that and have some smooth motion! i imagine her flipping and her hair waving in the wind... that would be such a unique looking game...