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i like it but it would be more cool if you added more boxes.
I think it's because I wanted the characters to stand out a bit more. I gave them the darkest color for their lineart.
Very easy to read =) Usually gameboy-mockups fail at it. They are made too detailed even with the fact the screen is so small. I just wondered why the floors would not have a darker lineart. Would make it even easier to read :/ Hmh...
There are a ton of really, really good submissions this week, so I don't see myself winning anything any time soon :p
And yeah... typography is one of my biggest weaknesses in any sort of art.
This is so cute and believable I don't see why you wouldn't have a chance to win it all this week.
I'd play this game for real.
My only real crit is the title logo which is fine looking but to me does not quite fit the 'look and feel' of the rest of the 2 screens. I like your work a lot but think typography is a weakness.
This is really good. I certainly think this has a good chance. Love the moon and sky.
That is so cute... I would play but I wouldn't let any of my friends know that I did
Pretty cool. I figured this was yours when I saw the character on title screen, especially how he standing.
well, i would defiently play this game. I enjou how you shaded off for the title screen, and the game play looks like a lot of fun@
right screen looks nice