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The star parts are really pretty. But their precision doesn't match the sketchiness of the shooting star and the moon and the clouds, in my opinion.
Kind of, sort of finished now. I might AA or even edit the moon even more later.
Cleaned up the moon in the corner, added a few more stars, smoothed out a few things. I might add even more to the piece, but I'll have to experiment a bit.
@Petrichor: Thanks. :D
I can't wait to see this cleaned up, it's very promising :)
Oh, haha, that little comment about it being trash was just a joke. Yeah, I figured the moon with the little antennas would be pointed out, and I'll clean it up and change it around.
D'oh, a WIP forum. I'll use that from now on. Thanks.
Not trash and you don't need to start over, I just think you need to put even more work into it. At the moment though, it is very sloppy in some places, especially the bottom right hand corner. BTW, we have a WIP forum here. Also, check out these three pieces. Maybe not exactly the type of thing you were going for with this piece, but could serve as some inspiration.
lovely clouds! you critisise yourself!