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Interesting, thanks! Never thought about formatting my critique as a video, that could actually be pretty helpful...
Also, don't discount what Conny said, they're totally right. You may not want to go back and edit this piece further with those crtis (though you still can!), but whether you do or not you should keep those crits in mind so you don't make those same mistakes next time :3
Oh I'm sorry, hope it was helpful though. I guess I should have asked before critting.
@ConnyNordlund: Thanks a lot for critique but I wish you'd said that on forums before I posted it D:
@ Ego: Here it is:
www.youtube.com/watch
I really like this. Very painterly. I would use a different outline for the grass, though. I think that's what could be improved, the line art.
Also his feet are quite whimpy for this character. His upper body is very big and with such small feet it feels disproportionate. Also the stomache area feels like it should be tucked in a bit, it'd show better depth too.
I made a quick paint over: http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/951/critb.png
Hope it makes sense and that it helps in some way.
got a 4/6 from me, your work is getting better and better. It is good to see that your learning from what other people try to teach you.
I can see some of Cyangmou's influence in there. Looks good man.
Also, would you mind tossing up a link to this tutorial by Alex about rock forms? I haven't seen it and would like to, replicating stone texture in art is a fascinating subject for me.
Muy bonito!, aunque la parte baja de las piernas, donde termina la cadera, no termina de gustarme del todo.
@Everyone Thanks a lot for good comments.
@Ego I'd have linked you to the Pixelation thread but sadly Pixelation is down for some reason.