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Weekly Challenge: Super heroic!
Really liking the visual style in this, and the sixth and seventh panels (the close-ups on the gas-mask man) are pretty freakin' awesome looking, composition-wise. You made some kick-ass color choices too.
The biggest trouble is that I don't see the "dawn of a new SUPER villain." It's really a pretty fine distinction though, I'm very impressed.
On a pixel scale though, this has a bunch of issues, most notably some crazy banding going on. The ore and what it's resting on have some problems defining themselves, and many of the lines could do with some smoothing. Several spelling issues (and needless abbreviations) break the really great style, but if you're not natively English that's not a big deal really.
Really liking the look of it all though!
He gonna create a nuclear weapon, so this not uranium, this ore and when uranium decays, it emits a pale green light and I just reinforced this same fairy-tale
uranium doesn't look anything like that. And what is he gona do? build his own reactor? :\
6 and 7 are awsome.