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andy0_0black @ 6/19/2010 22:02 commented on Footy Juggler United

 This is really fantastic. The animation and general style of it are impressive and inspiring. I think the ball could use a little squashing and stretching to give it a bit more life and oomph, though.

 

Wonderful job, sir



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andy0_0black @ 6/19/2010 21:49 commented on Octopus the programmer

 Hmm yeah I think that may be a step in the right direction. The only problem I'm seeing with it is that the black parts on the chair and laptop and table legs are really hard to tell apart from the dark purple of the background. Making it brighter like that helps a little, but I think the best bet may be to make the chair and table brighter? Your call, really.

Either way, good work. I really like the octopus.



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andy0_0black @ 6/18/2010 15:56 commented on Knight walk-cycle

 It looks like the left arm and the left leg both go forward at the same time. it might look better if you made the left arm go forward when the right leg goes forward, like people run in life. also, the arms are pretty short.

besides that it looks good, especially the leg motion



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andy0_0black @ 6/18/2010 15:50 commented on Night Background

 this looks really good, but i agree with the others about the shading in the sky. It could use a little more smoothing and variation. The different areas of color in the sky aren't integrated quite enough yet, I would say. I can see that the method would work because the parts close to the moon look great.

anyhow good luck if you revisit this and in your future pixels, man



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andy0_0black @ 6/18/2010 15:38 commented on Pixel Portrait 2

 it's a little messy and the hair strikes me as sort of strange but i like it a lot. cool stuff, man



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andy0_0black @ 6/18/2010 15:34 commented on Octopus the programmer

 This is pretty cool

It might benefit from some extra brightness and had a little more contrast, though. It's kind of hard to see the laptop and chair, which makes it slightly unreadable



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andy0_0black @ 11/6/2009 18:15 commented on The end?

 That's very beautifully done



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andy0_0black @ 10/24/2009 16:04 commented on robot pirate gentleman

 Yessir it is meant to be a monocle

Yeah you're right the monocle string-chain-thing and shoulders (and probably hat) should definitely move, at least a little.

As for the eye patch, it's actually just painted onto the metal of his face



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andy0_0black @ 10/24/2009 09:57 commented on invidious coast

 Thanks

yeah, the jolly roger on the ship's sail isn't very noticeable. I agree that it could use some sort of stronger indication that it's a pirate ship.

I see what you mean about the unbalanced composition. Thanks for mentioning it, I'll be sure to focus more on composition in later pieces.



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andy0_0black @ 10/24/2009 09:53 commented on explosion tree

 thanks! yeah it is very scribbly. I tend to pixelscribble a lot



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andy0_0black @ 10/23/2009 22:03 commented on Dainty Long-Legs

 haha that's brilliant.

The only problem I see with it is that when he rises back up after smacking his face against the ground, his foot is not in front of him enough for it to propel him up without launching him forward. If his foot leads him by a bit before his leg stretches out, it may look a little more ...correct? 

Anyway great job



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andy0_0black @ 10/23/2009 21:55 commented on Do the Egg Walk!

 hehe, sillywalks. great job!



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andy0_0black @ 6/27/2008 20:50 commented on stick jedi
great animation, but the ending is a little weak. i understand you wanted it to loop effectively, but it kindof seems like more of an afterthought than a polished and intentional movement like the rest of the animation.

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andy0_0black @ 6/27/2008 20:38 commented on Pixel Pirate
that's pretty awesome but the skull seems very out of place and the perspective seems somewhat skewed.