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greenmango @ 8/4/2012 18:37 commented on Vampire

 Teeth look a little flat but I love the overall idea. It's beautiful 



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greenmango @ 8/4/2012 18:27 commented on Wizard

 The black outline seperating the face from the beard looks awkward and out of place. I am not sure why you didn't use the same outline-less style you used for the eyebrows. Other than that, I would say it's a nice start 



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greenmango @ 8/4/2012 18:15 commented on EVIL ROBOT: Robot Spider Skull

 I like how you did the reflection on the crown of the head but the yes could use a little bit of smoothing out



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greenmango @ 8/4/2012 18:14 commented on Redbeard The Vampire

 Vampires don't have beards because then it would get much too messy :) I love the skin texture



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greenmango @ 6/21/2012 10:45 commented on Poison tree

 Love how you managed to smooth over the transition from branch to leaf, that's always what catches me up with trees :D



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greenmango @ 6/21/2012 10:36 commented on Room for one last project

 It's huge! I had to shrink down my screen to 50% just to see it in its entirety! I honestly commend you for being able to manage all that space so exquisitely. I surely would have gotten lost in all those pixels 



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greenmango @ 6/21/2012 10:22 commented on SubMuncher mock up

 Looks great :D And am I just an idiot (and blind) or did you leave out the hero? :o



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greenmango @ 6/21/2012 09:43 commented on 9 staves

 Love these :D

The only thing that kills it for me is the one at the bottom right. I feel like those black lines are just too stark against some of the lighter colours and the jaggies are bothering me. Maybe you could have replaced some of the black with the darkest gray from the staff above?



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greenmango @ 6/21/2012 09:31 commented on Ant Golem

 Shape is great but I feel it could use a little more shading/ a stronger light source. I just expect to see the shiny shell of an ant. Of course, if your are going for a traditional mud/ dirt golem than I guess my point is moot. Great art though :D



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greenmango @ 6/1/2012 19:55 commented on Natsu FT FanArt ~Kiba

 His abs look weird lolol

Nice pixel in overall impression though



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greenmango @ 5/28/2012 18:44 commented on Naruto Universum - LSW Gallery

 Love the general style but alot of the minor details aren't very readbale unless you zoom in. Maybe simplify a bit?



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greenmango @ 5/27/2012 17:02 commented on Permafrost

 Your mountains look to be about three stories tall, but otherwise good piece :)



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greenmango @ 5/27/2012 16:53 commented on Flower schoolgirl

 Cute :) She reminds me of DW from arthur. I think that the black outlines in her hair are a little harsh though



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greenmango @ 5/23/2012 16:36 commented on Tarot cards

 @Imagician The tarot she is taking about is not the same as the one with pentacles, and swords and cups and all that. The cards have no meaning, they are the same as regular english playing cards but the letter cards have been translated into french (Roi, Dame, Chevalier and Valet I think )



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greenmango @ 5/18/2012 14:14 commented on flag of palau

 The background looks good (especially the water).

As for the foreground, the wizard's head is very oddly shaped and he seems to have no neck which is quite distracting for me. Also, the orb, if it is supposed to be glowing, should have a slight aura around it (and no black line). Other than that, I think it is very nice :)



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greenmango @ 5/18/2012 14:10 commented on Tree

 The shape of the trunk doesn't look very realistic because of its straightness (and the angle at which that brnach comes out of it) but other than that, really nice. The texture on the leaves looks good.



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greenmango @ 5/15/2012 16:41 commented on Nevercreature

 cool but it might pop out better at pixeljoint against a transparent bg



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greenmango @ 5/14/2012 14:29 commented on Nimana City Grayscale (Tiled)

 All of the windows look a litlle warped, but otherwise, really cool. It even took me a couple minutes to realize it was tiled 



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greenmango @ 5/6/2012 18:09 commented on Toribard's world

 Super Cute :) I thought the bird was the bluejay mascot (for the baseball team) at first though. Also, the guitar looks kind of out of place since it"s kind of just floating there glowing. Maybe put it on a stand or something.



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greenmango @ 5/3/2012 14:51 commented on SPECIAL STAGE

 really nice :)

That textured rock/ mountain top thing in the bottom-right corner looks kind of funny against the super flat clouds/ sky/ water though



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greenmango @ 4/27/2012 17:52 commented on Rooftop Level

 Love the sharp contrast you put into your work, it really makes everything stand out :)



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greenmango @ 4/24/2012 15:23 commented on Spring

Really cool idea but the dirt could use some texturing and the roof/ ladder/ trees look jagged (maybe add some AA?)



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greenmango @ 4/22/2012 11:41 commented on Fetus clock

 Lolol best idea ever

 



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greenmango @ 4/18/2012 16:59 commented on "The Ring: The Game": The Poster

 there is an H in which and the girl coming out of the tv looks a little awkward but it's a really fun idea :)



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greenmango @ 4/18/2012 16:56 commented on Monk

 you should probably make the bg transparent if you can. Really nice work with the texture of the fabric though