The broken one is giving me trouble. Maybe try to show the liquid flowing out, and have the glass actually be transparent rather than still having the green colors on it. The breach looks good, it just looks like it's layered on.

Hah, I actually saw some of his WIPs while I was making this. I liked them, but they didn't have that "homey" feel I wanted to portray. I'm working at a much smaller scale than him, so it's harder to pack the details in.

I'm a programmer by trade, not a pixel artist. Any specific suggestions are welcome, as they will help me improve on my technique, and help me in the long run at mastering an art that I find foreign and difficult to grasp.

I found your profile earlier, AJ. Noticed your golem. Good job with that, by the way.